Reviews for Half Life
xxxAriha chapter 17 . 9/4/2013
So, I finally finished this story because I finally refound it and got internet back in my house. I mean, I got to the part where they find out Kurama's fate and all but that's where you stopped last time I read this. And I gotta say, I am amazed. I thought I was going to hate it and it made me sad, yeah, but this was amazing. I love that end. It makes you think there's more left to be told. I will say this, the idea of Kurama's soul disintigrating is awfully sad but, like I also said, there's more left to be told.
Moonpetal Lily chapter 17 . 5/7/2013
So...many...feels...! I've been binging on all your YYK stories over the past few days, and they're all wonderful. I love how you have fairly consistent canon across the H/K stories and related them to one another. And the feeeeeeeeels! Of this story especially. I'm going all incoherent over it, because you did such an extraordinary job of character development that I honestly felt like a douche for even considering wanting Kurama back. Shuichi is expressed beautifully.
Sano chapter 17 . 1/23/2013
I don't know whether to hug you or to kill you. My own conclusion is that Kurama loves Hiei so much that he inhabited Shuichi's body again, no matter how strongly he felt about being split from him. But now, he's letting Shuichi take the reins, which is as much of a split he can manage.

Such a wonderful read. Thank you for writing this.
Knight in Shining Glass chapter 17 . 12/16/2012
I read this whole story in one sitting. I can not even begin to describe how much I've loved this. The characters are spot on, the way you wrote Hiei and Shuichi broke my heart. I found myself unable to tear away. Now I'm not sure whether I like Hiei with Kurama or this human Shuichi more. I'm sure I'm going to come back and read this again, and leave a more coherent review than this... anyway, kudos to you.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/6/2012
I... wow. This is really nothing like I expected. And yet, I still really liked it. Bravo, this is really well written. The characterizations are spot-on.
Takara Taji chapter 17 . 3/26/2012
I read this story once quite a while ago, but just read it again. I could write a whole book on what I thought of this story - what I think happened, what I wished happened, how amazing your writing is, but I don't think I could fit it in 10000 characters haha. Anyway, I really enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading more of your writing :)
Mikila94 chapter 17 . 7/29/2011
I dont usually read shonen ai, but this was a good one. I mean it was one of those type of stories I like; where its pretty much up to the reader that is it romantic or not.
thisisanauthor chapter 17 . 5/12/2011
Absolutely adore in every way possible!
Amirali chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
The chapter was good at setting up the mystery, and the writing style was fluid. I would have liked some more visual description of the mysterious stranger. His clothing, his demeanor, etc. Otherwise definitely a solid lead in.

-Amir
twistedmind29 chapter 17 . 1/3/2011
This was so eloquently written, I cannot believe how well you personified Hiei, the entire thing blew me away, it was fantastic!
twistedmind29 chapter 8 . 1/3/2011
I'm sorry I haven't review sooner. That memory about the mirror! too funny!
shmeepeh chapter 16 . 12/2/2010
I...know I reviewed this like not even that long ago.

But I was bored and revisited it, aaagh, sooooobs I love it so much. u_u! You absolutely have a gift with this pair. It's perfect.

Although I would like to know what your interpretation of the ending is.
shmeepeh chapter 17 . 9/1/2010
So beautiful.

Thank you so much for writing this. 3
Within The Lines chapter 17 . 8/30/2010
This story was awesome. Throughout the last few chapters I kept having this feeling like Kurama was going to come back at the last minute and when he didn't it kind of made me sad, but I do feel happy for Shuichi. I'm really amazed at how you were able to distinct Shuichi from Kurama and make them two different people yet at the same time have so many similarities, but because they were once a part of each other. I expected to get confused along the way. Surprisingly enough I kept up. Also, I must say, irrelevant to the story, that I learned new vocabulary words from you. Great story! Keep writing more!
Phlogistics chapter 17 . 7/2/2010
This fic was really interesting, and the first time I've ever enjoyed the "Shuichi is still in there somewhere" idea. Thank you for writing this!
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