|Reviews for Love Me Leave Me|
| Regiathius chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Hey guys, I'm sorry. This one may never be finished DX I'm sorry!
| Sunflower shine chapter 2 . 12/3/2009
Hey, this is cool! I wonder what Phantom will do to Peta. Please update! I'm begging you!
| Pure Blood chapter 2 . 8/6/2009
I loved it~! 3 Lmao I loved the part when Phantom mocked Peta's dress/robe x3 I hope you update soon!
| Lady Bad Luck chapter 2 . 3/10/2009
I love it! Peta's little invisible trick is cool. I can do that sometimes.
"What am I doing naked in your room?" Ha! Priceless!
| vivid4 chapter 2 . 3/9/2009
this thing is getting good. The first interaction between Phantom and Peta was pretty funny, yet it managed to stay natural (well, I didn't buy the part Peta already prostrated himself before Phantom after getting a few looks of him, but the quarrel was smooth). I didn't like the way you strayed away from Phantom's thought to explanation about the Orb's brainwash in the middle of the story though.
| The Ladies Luck chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
This is cool. Please write more.
Um... why'd you say Caldera? That's a type of volcano.
I like the descriptive imagery that you used to describe the place; it almost makes the scene clear enough to see.
You've put capital letters in some odd places though; 'Dawn', and 'Night-time'. I understand why you capitalised 'They' though, I think.
And one last thing- try to put period-appropriate similes in. I'm fairly sure they don't have buses in MAR Heaven.
But this is really interesting. As I said, please write more.