Reviews for On a Bridge
KillerElephants chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
AMAZING!

I absolutely loved this story. The ending was great!

Well done you. :D

K x
greentoothbrush chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
made me laugh out loud, youre a really good writer!
Scoop-K chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
My favorite line was this one:

“It’s Sunday. You can catch them at church. Oh, wait, that’s hallowed ground.”

I chuckled aloud in a public place over that. Totally awesome :D
anacaro chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
This story is so Lois.

Loved reading it and cant wait to read yoor other stories.
xxkizixx chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Cute. Realistic. Beautiful.

Loved it.
Nello15 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Beutiful. I really enjoy your Clois stories, they are amazing.
Lpra chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
great story!
Meg chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
"Enough to see the words written in the snow and sliding to his feet because he was walking on them, stuttering and damaging them beyond recognition.
ColleenJoy chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
That was fantastic from the amazing, beautifully crafted start to the humorous finish.
I'm Feeling Puckish chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
very cute :)
sunset chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
wow. loved the non-verbals but loved the dialogue even more...

"It's peaceful out here."

"It was. Now, it's just cold."

"But you're here."

"Not anymore. Bye Smallville."

Lois: That's it? 'Lois.'

Clark: I was going to say I missed you. I changed my mind.

Clark: I thought you hated the Lana-Clark rollercoaster?

Lois: I do. But, it's your favorite ride. Just because I wouldn't buy a ticket doesn't mean I wouldn't stand by and wait. You know, just to see you puke your guts out. Tell you I told you so.

Clark: Have I ever told you what a great 'friend' you are?

Lois: Why state the obvious, Smallville?

"I did miss you, Lois."

"I know, Smallville. I'd miss me too"
LyraVerse chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
I loved it. That just put a smile on my face. It had a nice flow and rhythm to it.