|Reviews for Comeuppance|
| harleys chapter 5 . 9/7/2010
Another amazing chapter.
| harleys chapter 3 . 9/7/2010
God, so freaking well written. Poor Edward. Poor Bella.
| LovelyLoves chapter 7 . 8/4/2010
awww :) good story! great writing! love those heas!
| LovelyLoves chapter 6 . 8/4/2010
so i started reading this chapter not really caring about what jake had to say, but, it was really good! lol awww :) yea, i guess Jake deserves some real love-in love lovin'! (and I like that we're calling her "May)
| LovelyLoves chapter 5 . 8/4/2010
| LovelyLoves chapter 3 . 8/4/2010
lol, which anais nin stories did bella read to edward...?
| LovelyLoves chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
oooh :( poor Edward, he wanted to have Bella's babies! (hahahaa)
| LovelyLoves chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
"plus a hefty few more inches for the shag sword I knew he had scabbarded in his pants...the thick timber of his wood.."! lol, the thing you say! so many little jewels in this chapter, those were juest two of my favs! i love your writing! not to rock your jock, but you are truly the verbal arteest! and I love this Jake, and that Bella got hers, and I kinda don't even care about Edward right now...!
| apricot817 chapter 7 . 7/29/2010
Yikes. The first few chapters were very hard to get through. Edwards pain and Bella's regret was painfully evident. But the pairing of Jake and May was awesome. Hawt secks rules! Seriously though, you're style of writing is impressive. The words elegant and impeccably strung together so that the story flows like the telling of an epic poem from ancient times. Very nice.
| all sunshine makes a desert chapter 7 . 4/14/2010
Except for the over-use of exclamation marks, this story is really bloody good.
| mizz-sunshin3 chapter 7 . 3/20/2010
Good story )
| necessarily chapter 2 . 3/14/2010
So I was just browsing around while bored and found the Golden Lemon Awards website. Your Chapter 5 of Comeuppance beat the living hell out of whatever won. (The Dominant! Scoff! Oh Please.)
Oh God! This story of yours is sexy and amazing! And kind of ... racist? Maybe! I mean seriously. His tomahawk? Calling him Tonto? It's really wrong-ish but in a giggly "this is forbidden" way. So titillating.
After the nominated chapter, I started reading at Chapter 1. Wow, this is different. I read a lot and... how do you not have more reviews? It's well-written, original. I'm going to read more of your stories, I promise.
Just letting you know where I am, I've read Chapter 5 Comeuppance, and now chapters 1 and 2. Holy hell, girl.
| MuSiC HaTs chapter 7 . 2/21/2010
Oh my gosh my heart just MELTED. I luvvled this. I luvvles you for creating this. I hate myself for not finding it sooner. Thank you for making a story that only the strongcan live through. May the rest of your stories be happy, and I shall now pass out.
Nyquil is deadly.
| MuSiC HaTs chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Woah. Just woah. And this only has 107 reviews? Huh. Maybe you should put 'Comeuppance: Only the Strong Survive' Eh. I'm gonna make this quick, because I'm loopy from nyquil. As much as I hate BelJake (and I really, really, REALLY do) I know and accept that this is necessary. And with that said, I move to the next chapter, and watch as Bella totally rips a new one in Edward's heart.
| KristenLynn chapter 7 . 2/20/2010
OK... finally finished this (I know I told you a few weeks back that I had started it, but RL has been majorly in the way of any fun reading lately)...
Wow. I have to say that I did not like the beginning, yet I read it, even knowing what was going to happen, hoping that you would find a way to redeem everyone. And you did. It was brutal and painful, yet [I assume] realistic. Aftermath of something like that would have to be ugly and gut-wrenching, and I suspect that only the strongest of couples would be able to work through it and move beyond it-honestly, I don't know if I could. Thank you for giving this Edward and Bella a shot at a new, better life, for allowing them to learn about and finally admit to their inseurities and fears, after such a major life-fail moment.