|Reviews for Red Skinny Jeans|
| Living in a fantasy chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
When I first found this...it was long, and I was short on time. Sadly I got distracted and it sat in my inbox for ages. The day I FINALLY read it is the day the site DIES so I can't review it. How unfair.
I loved it. I love the way you write Mello's POV. It was amazing. This story was epic, and long, and wonderful. And the last three lines are hilarious and really just...work. Great job
| Daydream Nation chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
omg, im going to die from an overdose of wit an good humour. D:
that was amazing. and like...beautiful. and stuff.
| Bleeding Prose chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
ROFL! I loved it! It was so like Mello, and despite Near's semi-OCness everyone of perfect! And the sarcasm was wonderful, I'm a sucker for sarcasm!
PS I would glomp Mello even if he was dressed like a hobo! :3
| bowlerhatfringe chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
AWESOME! This was the best, everbody was in character, and the ending made me laugh pretty hard. I gasped and was about to shout at the bus part, until I read the actual last line...then I was about to kill Mello in my tears of laughter. XD
DA BEST! As soon as I read the summary I leapt at the computer bringing it into a death hug...because I love your work so much. _ I reading your other stories currently, so just wait until I review! (how refreshing it is to read your other stories after The End Is Near just finished!) XD
Well, I give you the best wishes on your future pieces (not like you need it, though! XD)
-Katrina Tora (who once again, thinks of you almost like an idol...or maybe completely. Whatever suits the situation better, lol. XD)
| Bligy chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
I LOVE IT! Of course... Mello is unquestionably my favourite character, and this being from his POV is just... awesome. Also, Matt is the most amazing thing this side of awesomesauceness!
| Mavi chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
And that ending...
... OMG. XD
| Absolve chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
W-what? Hoshiz, that hit by a bus thing scared the proverbial nuts out of me.
| Deus3xMachina chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
This was fantastic. Mello is so hilarious... it's a shame his rushed arc is mostly doom-and-gloom-and-boom. He had such potential.
For some reason, this fic REALLY reminded me of Pure Chance. But I loved Pure Chance. So it's a good thing, really.
| black laurel chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Genius, truly genius. You must be a genius.
"This, of course, translated to Jesus, Matt, I’m sorry, all right?"
Of course it did.
"All right, probably an elf in a seasonally-themed porn movie. Details, details"
...Mello-PoV must be the awesomest thing since...since...I don't know. Something. A lot. Woah.
"Everybody in that room probably wanted to do me right about then.
Everybody except Rester, anyway. What a rebel."
*chokes on laugh*
"…on the upside, my new skinny jeans were redder than ever."
"He gave me a pause to realize that I’d just admitted to crashing into a telephone pole."
Near and Mello... Heh.
The following exchange of words was kind of scary. At least on Near's part. Huh.
"It was probably a little bit blasphemous to carry Grand Theft Auto V into the Day Mass in my backpack, but I didn’t think Jesus would mind."
Mello-PoV...can't get enough of it. :)
“You didn’t die,” I reminded him. “And that is pretty fucking nice.”
Near was one crafty lil' albino at the new year's party. Hehe. Awesome. Loved the part when Aizawa clapped. Awesome.
“What you should do,” Near said, “is to get him drunk again and kiss him.”
...I never see these coming. Your Near is way too awesome. (I used to dislike him so much too... Not your Near but the original. But you made me kind of like the original too...)
“Just—you—flirt. With everything that moves. With everything that has a pulse.”
“I love you, too, Matt,” I whispered. “And I am fucking terrified of what that means.”
"God bless America. The Pope’ll come around.
Or come out.
Hey, you never know."
...I didn't see that one coming either. Oh dear...haha.
"Typically—wonderfully typically—Matt took my hand the second we got outside and refused to let it go. He’d be buying me flowers and chocolate next.
Not that I had a problem with that."
Seriously, the ending. Damn. How could a fic that ends with a:
"There’s something wrong with you."
directed at the readers NOT be awesome? Of course it would have to be awesome as it was.
Sorry about the humongously (that is totally a word..I think) long review with rather little actual content.
But the whole point of this was that I loved the fic. It was awesome.
| 1557757 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Haha. Best ending ever. Of course, I "wasted" about 45 minutes reading this... but it was worth it! :D
The voice you hold throughout the entire story is perfect! Stories like this are why I have a really hard time picking my favorite out from between Mello and Matt. :3
| biawutnow chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
"stop outsourcing prostitution"
LOFL...I LOVE the way you voice Mello in this story. Its so well done and funny. Awesome job, definitely favoriting XD
| Alizz chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
'It wasn’t my fault she’d immediately started stripping, you know? Not that I didn’t have that effect on most people.'
mello is so full of himself lolz.
Wow, brilliant story. Really lovely. Five stars 8D
| bookenworum chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
wow! this certainly was unexpected, every time I thought I'd got the subject, there was something different!
first I thought that it was your usual one shot, than I thought it was all about the red skinny jeans, then another surprise showed up..
you managed to surprise me with this one! with the different subjects, it's still a wonderful, lengthy one-shot :)
and Matt's blood all over the red skinny jeans was an amzing metaphor (or whatever it's called D:) i really liked that line, though I was worried for Matt and almost thought the one shot would be about how he died.. which turned out to be quite different from what I thought.
and you're Near is awesome, loved how he threw the pillow back XD
and Matt and Mello's romance of course :)
| random-laughter chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I absolutely adored this oneshot. I'm reading it in place of my history homework, but it's completely worth it. I love your characterization of Mello. I find it completely believable, and the ending was just perfect. Especially the last three lines. Great job, and I'll definitely be adding this to my favorites!
| Toshiko Sato chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
This is officially the best fanfiction I have ever read. Um, it is 5:11 a.m. and my brain is in the process of melting so I can't really make this a long praise filled reveiw, but if I was not about keel over I would. Just imagine lots and lots of compliments. I'll write a better reveiw after I get some sleep.