Reviews for Hurt
pineapplefish chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
yea, I love it please write more!
The Plutomite chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I liked it.
Drifting One chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
I have no constructive criticism to give you, because I can find nothing. This is a wonderfully written story, and it is an enjoyable read. Much as I like to read stories where Malchior repents, he would never. He is selfish, is manipulative, and used her. You communicated this with a clarity rarely found on this site. Bravo!
StaffOfMoonlite chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Great Story! You really capture Raven's emotions well! :)
Somewhere In Time chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
I would expect to see Raven like this, because for her, relationships aren't just everyday occurences. Her heart is hard to open up, thus more vulnerable to hurt. But I'm sure she'll find someone else worthwhile.:)