|Reviews for For The Longest Time|
| LivingInALostGeneration chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
awwww, loved it! xxxxx
| Melinda the Proud Bookworm chapter 2 . 8/5/2010
Just a point of cannon. They were in Bella's truck.
| True Colours chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
You wrote Esme's POV really well, showing her compassionate nature and concern for Edward. My only criticism would be that wish you had carried it on to show her thoughts as the visit progressed, particularly when Alice just bounces straight up and kisses Bella on the cheek.
| FishieGurl chapter 2 . 3/21/2009
Wow this is really good update soon ok!1
| EdwardLovesBella02 chapter 2 . 3/11/2009
aw, that was extremely sweet!
| DanitheET chapter 2 . 2/18/2009
*sniff* ah, darn it! you choked me up with that last line, and you might owe me some dental bills for how sweet this is.
| TWILIGHTreader1 chapter 2 . 2/15/2009
aw! :D this is so sweet. i really liked it. i'm glad someone finally did her pov, but i think you could have continued until the piano scene, when she left to give them privacy. well that doesn't matter, this is a very good story/scene/moment-whatever, it was good. lol :D
| edwardplusbella620 chapter 2 . 2/8/2009
oh this was a really good one. im currently writing a short fanfic of this, except with carlisle pov. well done. )
| RandomUser674 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Is there going to be anymore to this? It seems like it should go somewhere.
I noticed you didn't mark it "Complete", so...
| alltheships chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Yay! I liked it! update soon!
| timetravellingvampirewithawand chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
argh none of the stories are finished i love this too!
| too lazy to login chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Um... I didn't see any errors whoever commented below. On the contrary, it was PERFECT! You're so good at everybody's mind, how bitter Rosalie is, how sweet Esme is, how innocent Alice is and how suffer-in-silence Edward is. I really love it! DEFINITELY KEEP WRITING!
| soccerstr1194 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
i like this story, i will keep reading and reveiwing if you keep writing. :] so please do. some errors i think, but other than that it was a great story.