Reviews for Ed, Edd, Eddy n Edna
AnnHero chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
I am going to be honest (not offensive) in this review.

The first problem with this story is it's lack of plot. I have read some chapters and all of them lack common sense and meaning. The story is too cluttered and rushed. One minute, the Ed's are fighting about pornography. Then Nazz randomly walks in and shoves an Ugly Betty ripoff Mexican girl in their faces and then they become friends. The pop culture references are getting annoying as well.

The second issue is with Kevin, he would NEVER hit a girl (especially if she is another way to get to Nazz.) He would act nice when Nazz was around, then be rude when she leaves.

The final issue is with Edna herself, she seems too Mary sue. I am not saying she is, she seems like she could be going ether way at this point. The Ugly Betty thing is irrelevant and pointless.

I see that this story is categorized as Humor, but it's not all that funny or entertaining. I suggest in future writing that you seriously get a Beta. You're not a bad writer, it's just that you (like so many others, even me) need help.

I hope to see improvements in your writing,

-AnnHero
Emma Iveli chapter 16 . 6/26/2009
That was a goo chapter...
Matthew chapter 15 . 6/24/2009
For your next chapters,use Ted (my OC) or THIS will happen!

(shows a shadowy figure with a katana) I dunno what happens next.
A.Fox chapter 15 . 6/12/2009
good story but this chapter could have used an alligator

signed
Emma Iveli chapter 15 . 6/12/2009
I liked the One Piece jokes of course... and for some reasion the Friends joke... I don't know why...
Majin Hentai X chapter 14 . 6/7/2009
Decent if a bit odd
Emma Iveli chapter 14 . 5/8/2009
Scrubs didn't get cancicled... it ended... there's a difference. Anyways good chapter.
Emma Iveli chapter 13 . 5/6/2009
I likeed the begging with Jumanji... that was my favrotre part!
Emma Iveli chapter 12 . 4/18/2009
I have ot say, I love the ending... good chapter and nice work on using Chiller.
Emma Iveli chapter 11 . 4/14/2009
Hm... that was good... I can't wait for the next one.
Emma Iveli chapter 10 . 4/12/2009
That was a great chapter, the killer sisters are going to be great villains. Also that was a very funny mistery joke.
Emma Iveli chapter 9 . 4/8/2009
Thaat was a very good chapter... I liked the Fraggle Rock joke... that brings back memories... Good job...
Emma Iveli chapter 8 . 4/3/2009
Good chaapter, I jsut relaized one thing you shoudl have had... In Living Color with Homey the Clwon.
kookeechan chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I created an Edna, too. Only she is Double-D's cousin. Good luck with the fic!
Emma Iveli chapter 7 . 3/29/2009
I liked the Family Man joke... it was really funny. Good chapter and also nice Lucky Star Refernce! Bye-Nii!
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