Reviews for Make It Make Sense to Me
Dragon Lord Coker chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
oh but it makes perfect sense (I think) it was to give life... to Cloud
CSKazaam chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
LOL the coloring book part! XD **imagines Seph's expression.** And that's so cute that Cloud was coloring with Marlene.

Poor Zack! That's so horrible what Seph did to him, and that Cloud wants Seph to stay away from him. ;_;

**snickers Cloud's thoughts about the rain.** XD And that's so priceless when Seph shows up with an umbrella! I can only imagine Cloud's expression. LOL.

Ooh, I really like how the conversation went! How Cloud was so angry and frustrated, and Seph being so cold, especially near the end. Seph stabbing Zack is such an awful memory for both of them! ;_; **hugs them.**

And I really like how Seph is always making Cloud figure out the right answers himself. And now he's got even more to wonder about!

Can't wait to see what comes next! And Zack will be so happy to find out that Seph really is alive!
Prisonerksc2-303 chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
WOW! Just wow! That was amazingly written. I love how you write from Clouds pov. Cloud coloring? LoL thats awesome. 'Only to give life', well, when you put it like that Sephiroth, it seems to make sense. Or does it. The interaction between them is perfect. Anyway, your stories always kick major arse! Keep up the awesome work. Loved it!
Chibi Cheesecake chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Ooh! I like that this is from Cloud's POV. And the fact that it creates more questions than it answers (just like watching an episode of Lost...). I'm especially interested in what Zack will think of this, especially the news that Sephiroth's alive. Can't wait to see more!
cloudstrifejen chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Sephiroth really IS an idiot... No offense though! It's just I'd cried a little about how so many people died on ly to give life? I think... It's only a new beginning. Goo work by the way! Oh, this story seems to relate to Final Fantasy VII more than to Dissidia... Well, it's only concerns about Cloud & Sephiroth.
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Yay for the inspiration!

Ooh, I like how you have it in Cloud's P.O.V. talking to Seph. (LOL at the "Don't look at me like that" line!)

And ooh, so sad... wondering if Seph ever liked Zack... And I loved the mention that Zack still believes in him.

I love how Cloud's motorcycle has a name. XD **snerks at the "Why didn't I get the umbrella" line**

And aww... him holding the umbrella... so squee! The conversation was so bittersweet... **hugs them**

Loved it!
Calenlass Greenleaf chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
/Marlene likes it when I color with her.

. . . Yeah, I was using a coloring book. Don't look at me like that./

All right, I won't. *grin*

As for the rest of the story-*curses at Sephiroth for being so mystifying*

/"You're not making sense!" I scream at you. "Sephiroth . . . you're not making sense. . . ."/

My thoughts exactly.

Loved how you portrayed the emotions in this story.