Reviews for Slipping Through the Cracks
monkey fang chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
this story was really good you should continue it further after it ends wit hjhon finally figuring out his mistake
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Very sad. Wonderful work!
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
DEan's panic and John's angst at the end were the best...just the fix i needed. Again great characterization.
Molto Alesato chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
God, I would love a sequal to this.
Lillian DeVega chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
emotions emotions emotions.

really great story. sam as a martyr and john as an ass. that's classy. somehow i can really imagine that their childhood could have been like this.

thanks for sharing you story.
Sweetheart From Hell chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Good story, I really liked it, though I think it could have focused a little bit more on John after Sam got sick. But that's just me. Good work!
Thriving Willow chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
I didn't tear up...nope. Not me...
dreamerswaking chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Wow. That was heart wrenching. It kinda makes me want to read what happens next now that John realizes how negligent he was being. Awesome story.
vampyfreak chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Liked the fic
Dassy1407 chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Aw, that was a cool story! Good writing and idea! )

Gohanzgirl chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Wonderful writing! I loved reading this!
Hearty1 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
I don't review often, but have enjoyed your stories a lot. The stories are totally engrossing. Your writing style is excellent - you know your doing well when the story takes you for an uninterrupted ride - as this one did.
fatcat91 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Awsome. Seriously it was great. I loved it. I think you should write a sequal or something.
freefall-gypsy chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Why are you leaving it there?
Joby87 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Oh my God, this was so heart-wrenching! Wow, you certainly created a masterpiece with this fic. And it served John right to feel guilty over what happened to Sam. Your words moved me! Just reading about what Sam was going through...I have no words. Awesome fic. Your talent is amazing. Take care. Joby ;P
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