Reviews for Slipping Through the Cracks
Von chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
monkey fang chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
this story was really good you should continue it further after it ends wit hjhon finally figuring out his mistake
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Very sad. Wonderful work!
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
DEan's panic and John's angst at the end were the best...just the fix i needed. Again great characterization.
Molto Alesato chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
God, I would love a sequal to this.
Lillian DeVega chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
emotions emotions emotions.

really great story. sam as a martyr and john as an ass. that's classy. somehow i can really imagine that their childhood could have been like this.

thanks for sharing you story.
Sweetheart From Hell chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Good story, I really liked it, though I think it could have focused a little bit more on John after Sam got sick. But that's just me. Good work!
Thriving Willow chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
I didn't tear up...nope. Not me...
dreamerswaking chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Wow. That was heart wrenching. It kinda makes me want to read what happens next now that John realizes how negligent he was being. Awesome story.
vampyfreak chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Liked the fic
Dassy1407 chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Aw, that was a cool story! Good writing and idea! )

Gohanzgirl chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Wonderful writing! I loved reading this!
Hearty1 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
I don't review often, but have enjoyed your stories a lot. The stories are totally engrossing. Your writing style is excellent - you know your doing well when the story takes you for an uninterrupted ride - as this one did.
fatcat91 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Awsome. Seriously it was great. I loved it. I think you should write a sequal or something.
freefall-gypsy chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Why are you leaving it there?
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