|Reviews for One Day Too Late|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/3
Cute I love it
| tua33915 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
This is just as good as your other one-shot where Lois fights for her man. You may not be a Lana basher but I have no problem with The Pink Princss seeing the CLois-y goodness with her own crying eyes. Again, this is SO what should've happened instead of the Arc of Infinite Stupidity post-Bride in Season 8 and it wouldve been even better had it happened pre-mortal in Season 5. But I guess Clark wouldn't know how good riding a Harley could feel had be not outgrown the bike first.
| LuckySVFan chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Oh, the things that happened after Bride - hunt me to this day. I was not a Lana hater, but I hate Clana more than life itself :-D Lana was better with Jason and Lex. Anyhoo, back to Clois... boy, how I wish the show had gone this route. I love how they tease and banter with each other. It's always good natured fun with these two :) But the real show, screwed up, big time - there was NEVER a reason for him to get back with his high school girlfriend... geez! Lois and Clark are a much better couple and really Lois is the ONLY woman for him!
| TheGryfter chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Yes, Lana, watch and learn and scream on the inside! HAHAHAHAHA!
Sorry, just very anti-Clana at the moment, and it gets me going.
Loved the Lassie reference. That made me laugh.
| Fionabeam chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Love how you did this. Savage story _
I like how you made Lana, well Lana. Alot of authors make her a right B*h or far too annoying. Although, I don't like the character so i can understand why people do it, but i don't think it's necessary.
Anyway I'm ramblin. This was really well done, and think this is exactly how the episode would have played out if Doomsday and Lana hadn't shown up. Also thought it was hilarious as the Rolling Stones song You Can't Always Get What You Want was playing just as I was reading this fic. Lol, perfect! _ Anyway I enjoy alot of your stories, especially when there is no Clois on tv, so thanks!
| SonicH2O chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
yay! I can't believe you're writing Smallville -I have to admitt I have like, 2 clark/lana fics to my name, from back in the pre Lois days, but yeah, I love clois! glad a you found a new show, but i have to say, lost is really good right now, i hope you turn back in cause I love your jate stuff SO much!
| CindyB chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Lovely fic. I really enjoyed it. As for Lana, I would never bash her for her feelings, only her actions and in this fic she walked away.
| Secret Thought chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
This is my story! I think I'm in love with you, this is the way everything SHOULD have gone! :D
| Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
| reeven chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
you idea was moch better than the original
| CuteANDSexxxy17 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Wonderful! And Great! I love it, that is how it should be, for real.
Great JOB! I love how Lana ran away, didn't even say Hi, what bad manners LOL!
Please post more soon, all your Clois stories Rock!
Keep it Going :)
| I'm Feeling Puckish chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Very cute! :)
| Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Great story! Lois wearing just one of Clark's shirts, "cooking" scene and Lana spying on them (too late, ha-ha-ha!)
Why didn't they do something like this in the show? (sigh)
| superlc529 chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Great job! I wish that your version would've happened instead. It would've been MUCH better! I look forward to reading more wonderful CLOIS from you! EXCELLENT JOB AND LONG LIVE CLOIS! :)
| cloisharley chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
yep i enjoyed your story - Clark kent coming into the kitchen in just sweat pants! i was definately hooked lol. i've turned into less of a lana basher myself but sometimes old habits creep in and i just wind up shouting at the TV lol. its actually clark that makes me a bit mad at the moment though...bring on imfamous!