Reviews for One Day Too Late
rehemandayishimiye32 chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
love it. Lana got what she deserved. never really liked that bitch
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
She has a problem with Clark having sex with Lois but she didn't seem to have any problems with spreading her legs for Lex.
Tabitha Siceron chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
Omg that was great i absolutley loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Cute I love it
tua33915 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
This is just as good as your other one-shot where Lois fights for her man. You may not be a Lana basher but I have no problem with The Pink Princss seeing the CLois-y goodness with her own crying eyes. Again, this is SO what should've happened instead of the Arc of Infinite Stupidity post-Bride in Season 8 and it wouldve been even better had it happened pre-mortal in Season 5. But I guess Clark wouldn't know how good riding a Harley could feel had be not outgrown the bike first.
LuckySVFan chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Oh, the things that happened after Bride - hunt me to this day. I was not a Lana hater, but I hate Clana more than life itself :-D Lana was better with Jason and Lex. Anyhoo, back to Clois... boy, how I wish the show had gone this route. I love how they tease and banter with each other. It's always good natured fun with these two :) But the real show, screwed up, big time - there was NEVER a reason for him to get back with his high school girlfriend... geez! Lois and Clark are a much better couple and really Lois is the ONLY woman for him!
TheGryfter chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Yes, Lana, watch and learn and scream on the inside! HAHAHAHAHA!

Sorry, just very anti-Clana at the moment, and it gets me going.

Loved the Lassie reference. That made me laugh.
FarcicalUndoing chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Love how you did this. Savage story _

I like how you made Lana, well Lana. Alot of authors make her a right B*h or far too annoying. Although, I don't like the character so i can understand why people do it, but i don't think it's necessary.

Anyway I'm ramblin. This was really well done, and think this is exactly how the episode would have played out if Doomsday and Lana hadn't shown up. Also thought it was hilarious as the Rolling Stones song You Can't Always Get What You Want was playing just as I was reading this fic. Lol, perfect! _ Anyway I enjoy alot of your stories, especially when there is no Clois on tv, so thanks!
SonicH2O chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
yay! I can't believe you're writing Smallville -I have to admitt I have like, 2 clark/lana fics to my name, from back in the pre Lois days, but yeah, I love clois! glad a you found a new show, but i have to say, lost is really good right now, i hope you turn back in cause I love your jate stuff SO much!
CindyB chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Lovely fic. I really enjoyed it. As for Lana, I would never bash her for her feelings, only her actions and in this fic she walked away.
Secret Thought chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
This is my story! I think I'm in love with you, this is the way everything SHOULD have gone! :D
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
good story
CuteANDSexxxy17 chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Wonderful! And Great! I love it, that is how it should be, for real.

Great JOB! I love how Lana ran away, didn't even say Hi, what bad manners LOL!

Please post more soon, all your Clois stories Rock!

Keep it Going :)
I'm Feeling Puckish chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Very cute! :)
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