Reviews for Naruto Chuuten: Rising Into the Heavens
Guest chapter 9 . 11/16/2016
It pains me to say this bit I am actually quite glad that this story hasn't continued. I have to agree with the reviewer before me about being just like Naruto canon. I was frustrated throughout most of the chapters, i wont go into why because really that's just my opinion. I'm sure plenty of people enjoyed this story. I do apologize for the inconvenience, but I felt I had to write out my frustrations. Something actually helpfully? Well, you do have a few grammar mistakes sprinkled throughout your story, so that's something to work on I suppose. Also some of the sentences seem to get cut off occasionally, just thought I'd let you know. well that's all I got Ja ne~
Six Foot Assassin chapter 7 . 8/27/2016
This is basicly canon Naruto put into Bleach. Good thing you stopped writing this.
Gold Testament chapter 8 . 1/1/2016
Just make sure Momo falls for Sasuke before Aizen tries to get his claws into her. She doesn't deserve that pain, and deserves someone to make her want to be strong. Also I think that figure with Gama is either Naruto's own inner hollow, his true zanpakuto, a hollowfied zanpakuto like Ichigo's Zangetsu, Kurama, or a combination of all three.
Gold Testament chapter 7 . 1/1/2016
I believe Akogi is Orochimaru Hollowfied, however, since he did not devour Hinata's soul, shouldn't that mean she'd possibly be in soul society?
Gold Testament chapter 4 . 1/1/2016
NOOOOOOOO! No fireworks for Naruto... He would probably do pranks that could intimidate Captain Kurotsuchi, and make some of the most aloof shinigami laugh.
Gold Testament chapter 3 . 1/1/2016
Seems Nagato turned good sort of, but why can't they find a way to remove the tailed beasts and end them without taking out the jinchuriki? If that happened the Akatsuki would be respected by those the villages created to hate.
Gold Testament chapter 2 . 1/1/2016
NO! NO MOMOXSASUKE! Even he doesn't deserve that. I mean she was beyond obsessed Aizen for years, had massive denial about his double cross through the bount arc and half the winter war, became nothing but a pawn to dupe Toshiro from the point Aizen's treachary was known all the way to the fights with the Reigai when two Momos destroyed Toshiro, and seldom fought. Rangiku's also no good for Sasuke. She's like a fusion of Mei and Tsunade. The best two for Sasuke would be Isane (similar personality to Shizune), and Soi Fon. Honestly Naruto is good for Momo because his personality would draw her to him before Aizen could really get his claws into her, but as for Unohana, and Nemu, I draw a blank with them.
Gold Testament chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
Okay you started tragic, and ended funny.
shanno chapter 9 . 11/8/2015
Update pls!
Esmereilda chapter 7 . 9/29/2015
but really have to kill off everyone *pouts*
Esmereilda chapter 6 . 9/28/2015
lol a former ninja like Naruto would know a lot ab missions
Esmereilda chapter 5 . 9/27/2015
poor sora
Esmereilda chapter 4 . 9/25/2015
are they related to the kyuubi in anyway?
Esmereilda chapter 1 . 9/22/2015
lol kakashi and jiraya have totally opp personalities than byakuya
Guest chapter 7 . 6/6/2015
You clearly do not watch do not make statements that make naruto the kyuubi weaker than a mere hollow and for that ive stopped reading this bullshit you call a story
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