|Reviews for Jasper|
| purplepeopleeater78 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
oh ur mean, finishing the story before you even say what they're gonna do. pls add more.
| alice chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
u sure u don't want to add another chapter? I want to know what they r going to do.
| Noelle86 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
ok i'm having a dumb moment but what r they exactly implying? it's not what i think it is, is it?
| azure0610 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Hmm, well...I like the potential. I do wish you went more in detail. The short lines are a peeve of mine.
"..." I said.
"..." He replied
"..." I insisted
| Roseatron chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Great story! Bella and Jasper friendship needs more depth. More please!
| musically inclined chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
I loved it! Update soon!
| bat-with-butterfly-wings chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
oh *rubs hands together* I have a feeling that this is going to be good! :D
| Rikyra chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Love it! :) Can't wait to see what they do!