Reviews for Jasper
purplepeopleeater78 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
oh ur mean, finishing the story before you even say what they're gonna do. pls add more.
alice chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
u sure u don't want to add another chapter? I want to know what they r going to do.
Noelle86 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
ok i'm having a dumb moment but what r they exactly implying? it's not what i think it is, is it?
azure0610 chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Hmm, well...I like the potential. I do wish you went more in detail. The short lines are a peeve of mine.

"..." I said.

"..." He replied

"..." I insisted
Roseatron chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Great story! Bella and Jasper friendship needs more depth. More please!
musically inclined chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
I loved it! Update soon!

bat-with-butterfly-wings chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
oh *rubs hands together* I have a feeling that this is going to be good! :D
Rikyra chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Love it! :) Can't wait to see what they do!
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