I love that Kakashi thought it was the shadow clones. but yeah. In a way if shadow clones getting killed mentally acts like YOU getting killed. well lets just say I think I better understand why all the Jounin of Kakashi's era act so fucked in the head. they are not just dealing with garden variety PTSD comboed with ninja level suspicion of your allies. they are coping with their own deaths and the knowlage they can and will willingly die again to protect their village. and it might be the final time next time.

I kinda love this concept. very different from the Game naruto fics I have read before.

Is Naruto a retard or what? Why help the bastard Sasuke when he killed him!? Such a mooron... No wonder he is always the bigest sucker ever.

And why would Naruto leave his shitty appartment to the Uchihas when they already have a freaking mansion? What absurd logic is this?

Your a disgusting and pathetic individual.

Yeah bored already. Doing this over and over is just fucking stupid. I hate stupid Naruto and yours is worse than canon. Fuck that. Maybe you should die several times so you wouldn’t be so fucking stupid as a writer. This is crack. A retarded crack where nobody is capable of using their brain at all. -5/10. So many points lost for stupidity.

What a boring author

It is a good story, pity that you do not continue it, a greeting, bye!

hello, hope you are doing good.

any chance this is coming back. would love to see more.

Oh hell no. You did not just leave it off there!

Sad day. Best of luck to u. Thank u for the work given to date tho. :-)

I meant Dio from Jojo

Dio**

Every time Naruto gets into a fight or is in a hurry or something, I start clawing at my face. How dumb can one be to basically give his character Duo's ability, The World, and not have him use it?! In the very, very minute times that he does use PAUSE, he doesn't event exploit it to the maximum, I mean was there really any need for the fishing line shi against Zabuza, for fuck's sake just have him place himself behind Zabuza and unpause himself on the brink of decapitatind the mother fucker and be done with it.
It really irks me that you gave a super broken ability and not use it at all.
Is it about his sense of justice and not cheating shit? Just fuckimg use it for training and looking for shit for training uses, it can even used as a teleportation means by pausing time and changing location.

Okay, it was mildly entertaining until this point, but what is this shit ?