Reviews for I am
Aria Breuer chapter 2 . 4/5/2011
I like both these poems. The blend between the dark and the light sides really play off here, between Anakin Skywalker and his son, Luke Skywalker.

My suggestion in the second poem would be to take off the underline on the whole poem, but perhaps you had a good reason for putting in the underlines.

Anyway, good work. I enjoyed reading this poem.

-Aria Breuer
iloveluke1222 chapter 2 . 2/1/2009
This made me cry, in such a good way!

I love how at the end you put I am the Father of Luke Skywalker and I am the son of Anakin Skywalker...

Overall, very well done..
TheMacUnleashed chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
Good job! You really tied in the two poems in a very effective way. This chapter was a bit hard to read because it was all underlined, but that was the only thing that I noticed. You had good content.
Dgxuruend chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
good poems
TheMacUnleashed chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Good job. The only suggestion I have is to make your summary more positive; people tend to shy away from perfectly good stories if you give tham a description that makes you sound insecure about it.