Reviews for Consummation
Queen of Night chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
It flowed beautifully!
Larisa chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
I love it

A bit too metaphorically but I've got through and enjoyed the end. Very sensually

Thanks
seek-to-enchant121584 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
I thought it looked very nice, but I had no idea what you were talking about to start with. At first, I thought you were talking about how Warren discovered his powers. It was probably the first person thing that tripped me out. Perhaps my brain just isn't working like it used to, lol. It's like once I got to the end, went back to the beginning and reread it, it all came together for me. I was like "Oh...I get it now." Well...did that make any sense at all? In the end, I thought it was worth the read. Perhaps a hint too metaphorical, but eh, it hardly matters. Liked it all the same.