|Reviews for Time, Space and everything inbetween|
| she-was-a-rose chapter 9 . 2/27/2013
Drop bear...Terry Pratchett!
| she-was-a-rose chapter 2 . 2/27/2013
I am enjoying reading this; you weave words like promises and love songs. It's lovely.
| she-was-a-rose chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
AAAAAHHH IS VALA A TIME LORD?!
| NabikiB chapter 10 . 11/8/2012
One thing that's driving me wild is you usage of the word 'there', incorrectly...frequently. You've been using the wrong word entirely. The one you need is 'their' and in some cases 'they're'.
Correct uses, tenses and grammar...:
'their' is used as a possessive plural.
'they're' is the contracted form of 'they are' as opposed to 'they've' which is the contracted form of 'they have' or 'they'd' which is the contracted form of 'they had'.
go there, from there, there is: There indicates a place, placement or motion.
re: they had talked a few times about there (their) shared past as hosts even though there(their) experiences had been so different.
But mostly it's a really good story.
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 12 . 6/28/2012
So sad but I hope you wrote a new love for Celesta.
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 10 . 6/28/2012
Cute but sorry that story is almost at the end.
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 9 . 6/28/2012
Love it, love it.
| thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 8 . 6/28/2012
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| thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
Confused but interested.
| Arekanderu chapter 12 . 5/17/2011
Aww that was sweet!
| Caryn R chapter 12 . 1/21/2011
I loved this story! Thank you!
| Jonn Wolfe chapter 12 . 9/26/2010
| Miguel51 chapter 12 . 7/18/2010
That ending was...WOW. Liked how you added Rose at the end there. Nice touch. Those last two line were brilliant, by the way. Just brilliant.