Reviews for Guarding Edward |
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ChristyWIX chapter 35 . 4/9/2017 What a spectacular chapter! Floved it! I loved that they danced first, then made out a little , just before she bit him. She was so controlled through it all, it was fabulous. I loved that he got a special,meal as his last one. Now you have me craving shrimp scampi! I loved his awakening. So fluid and calm. Absolutely marvelous! |
ChristyWIX chapter 34 . 4/9/2017 Very beautiful wedding. I loved reading how much they love each other and how so very happy they both are. I often wondered why a helicopter wasn't used more often by the Cullen's. Why they didn't own one that they all knew how to fly. I think the only other helicopter I've read is Edward's in MotU. This was a refreshing change and a very fast way for them to get there quickly. Thank you. Would've come in handy for them if they had one in THE books, when James was after Bella. Alice and Jasper taking the car, never made sense to me. Helicopter to Port Angels, fly to Phoenix. Both privately owned by the Cullen's and operated by both Alice and Jasper. |
ChristyWIX chapter 33 . 4/9/2017 I'm so happy they planned it all so very fast. That Carlisle was able to get the license and that Pastor Webber was happy to officiate. Love the idea of Edward gifting Mike and Jessica their babymoon. Well, an after baby babymoon. Such a smart idea on how to get them away for a few weeks, safely. She reacted to the rings just as I hoped she would, yay! I'm also very happy that they'll have Edward's human friends there, as well as Angela and Ben to Bella. That is important. Alice knowing Bella's dress and having it ahead of time, was a huge bonus. I got all kinds of misty eyed with the women lending their wedding items to Bella to wear for her wedding. Also, was happy to learn that she stored up a bunch of her venom to shoot directly though his heart. Good. I'm hoping, because he knows what to expect and is willing, that he goes through the change faster. Not that that is a possibility, but it would be nice. |
ChristyWIX chapter 32 . 4/9/2017 That was so much fun they were all having, until Alice got the vision. I figured it was the nomad trio, when Edward got the phone call. Then when they were playing the game in this chapter, I worried that the nomads would be there and get Edward. So, I was relieved when Alice had the vision, to know they were a week away. I like that they pushed everything up and that they are getting married tomorrow, with his change to follow the day after. Having Edward a newborn is good. Little risky but, I like that the all agreed. Unlike the books when Bella asked them to change her to avoid this mess, and they all agreed not to. Your version is better. I hope they best the nomads. I hope they call in the Denali's, which now includes Garrett. Maybe Irina and Laurent will mate like THE books. That would only leave James and Victoria to dismantle. |
ChristyWIX chapter 31 . 4/9/2017 Yay, he got his cast off! And, a new brace to help until fully healed. I loved him and Bella playing the piano together. That was wonderful. Loved his trip to the safety deposit box with Laice. And, that she conveniently had a large purse with her. Very fun. Those inscriptions are perfect for Bella and Edward. Plus, I love that they will carry his parents with them forever. I think Bella will really love that too. I also really like that he's invited her to live with him. Woo-hoo! |
ChristyWIX chapter 30 . 4/9/2017 Emmett's cooking is very fun to read. Perhaps Edward's onto something and Emmett could open a restaurant. That could be fun. When it is time to move on, they have an accidental fire and compensate the employees generously, when they 'decide' to not rebuild and move on. The drawbacks are definitely drawbacks but, I agree with Edward, the perks far outweigh them. It would be harder if his parents were still Alia even and he had a large family. That he only has Jessica, Mike and the baby, makes it a little easier for him. I can see him making concessions in his will ahead of time for some of his estate to go to Mike and Jessica. Making sure all the other assets are firmly within the Cullen financials. I love that he has chosen to change. And, thatbhe has a good idea of when. |
ChristyWIX chapter 29 . 4/9/2017 Yes, the many perks of being a vampire. So many perks. I did like that Carlisle admitted that even he had issues stooping the times he saved the four others. Good to know. I like that Edward's gift is already manifesting and he's still human. That is definitely not a perk for him as a vampire. One we all know is a burden to him, because he can't turn it off. The barrage of thoughts are constant. Unless he's away from civilization. Wonder if one of them will mention that to him in their drawbacks conversation? Actually, I wonderful if any of them have thought that far ahead with his latent talent and his change? Maybe Carlisle. |
ChristyWIX chapter 28 . 4/9/2017 This was another really good chapter. All the different POV's give the reader different aspects to the story. It is quite good to read it that way. I liked how much they all missed one another. And, I liked that Tanya promised to not go after Jasper again. I think Alice may be right though. That promise came on the wings of her meeting aedward and she wants him now. A new game, if you will. Also really liked how open the Cullen's are with Edward and all of his questions. Not simply answering them but, answering them thoroughly. His last question made me very happy. |
ChristyWIX chapter 27 . 4/9/2017 I'm glad that Bella's shield worked for Edward. I loved that you put that part in his POV. Seeing how Tanya's talent worked from how he was feeling it, was interesting. It was wonderful to learn that Edward will have his gift to read people, if he chooses to change. Love, love, loved that he got so very much from Bella when she dropped her shield and let Edward in. That was fantastic. |
ChristyWIX chapter 26 . 4/9/2017 Awwww, the confessions of love and both are virgins! Have to say that surprised me with Edward. Especially with all the dates he had been spotted with in his past. Made me happy though that he hasn't been interested enough to go that route with any other. Tanya is a piece of work. I can't believe she's done that to Carlisle and Jasper. Alice 'sees' her wanting Edward and taking him against his will. That's sick and rape. Poor Edward. I hope that her family sees what is happening, and they cal Tanya out on it. |
ChristyWIX chapter 25 . 4/9/2017 Loved the switched POV's in this one. Starting with Bella and ending with Edward. Bella and her running and then the bear. Edward with his realization of love. Very much loved his proclamation too. That was fantastic. Her reaction was brilliant. Swoon. |
ChristyWIX chapter 24 . 4/9/2017 Another great chapter. I love that he's asking and she's answering. They are great questions too. He really is completely accepting of this. He even asked the very important question. does he have to be dying to be changed or, could she or Carlisle change her right now? Her reaction was exactly what one would expect. I love that Alice called right then too. Very much enjoying this. |
ChristyWIX chapter 23 . 4/9/2017 I really loved this chaoter. Seriously. I shouldn't have wondered if he would accept what they were. He not only accepted it, he seems to be embracing it fully. He really didn't even blink. What a wonderful chapter. |
ChristyWIX chapter 22 . 4/8/2017 I'm so happy they did decide on a Telluride for his recovery. They will have peace there. Bella has food. The family can visit. I really hope that he accepts what they all are. We know he already is speculating something. It was smart of her to be in that room, next to her painting. She can start by telling him it is her, and the story behind it. The same one she shared with her family. Again, I hope he accepts it. |
ChristyWIX chapter 21 . 4/8/2017 Loved being in Rosalie's head there for a bit. Kisses! Yay! Awake and alert that time, too. |