Reviews for Guarding Edward |
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ChristyWIX chapter 5 . 4/8/2017 So, he does know her from somewhere, just can't place it. Plus, we know Bella has never met him, as she would've remembered that for sure. Maybe a former client was one of Edward's past dates? Knowing of her but, never meeting her. |
ChristyWIX chapter 4 . 4/8/2017 Yay, she made it through the initial point of contact and met him. Now, she needs to make it through the meeting, in an enclosed conference room. A concert hall is one thing, a tiny room another thing entirely. |
ChristyWIX chapter 3 . 4/8/2017 I'm glad that Alice sees mostly good and some bad, from Edward and Bella. That she sees Bella in absolute joy. That's always good. |
ChristyWIX chapter 2 . 4/8/2017 Well, it is certainly better that she ca,e across his scent that way, and not in her office when his meeting with her happens. Yikes! I like that it is flipped and she's the vampire, he's the human and she's the one affected by his scent. |
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 4/8/2017 What a unique idea. I'm terribly intrigued. The cape part made me laugh. |
IsabellaEdward17 chapter 36 . 3/6/2017 See this is the problem...EDWARD wouldn't know that he could hear thoughts bcz it'll be as loud as it is when you speak.. Then how can he know he can read minds... Then how can he possibly know he's reading minds, and he wouldn't be able to control his thirst and thoughts upto that extent even if he knew that he was becoming a vampire as he'll be distracted all the time, fascinated by all other things, there are small small loopholes in this story, honest criticism, but it's a great storyline and great humor in between. |
Guest chapter 13 . 1/19/2017 I'm Assuming the missing scent is the mother? |
Kayozm chapter 5 . 1/18/2017 Thanks for the assurance that there won't be mutiple chapters told from multiple pov... That does get trying :) This one was great though. |
Just me chapter 27 . 1/10/2017 OMG your family are hilarious! Love the rug idea haha too funny. Anyway your story is awesome so far just as it is |
Just mr chapter 17 . 1/9/2017 I am guessing your kids are teens mine never let me live it down that I read fan fics. If I wrote them too ? Love your story love the characters And can't wait to read on |
love edward percy edsme eragon chapter 1 . 1/10/2017 i love this story especially how edward and bella got together |
Just me chapter 1 . 1/8/2017 Great Intro |
Sadseven21 chapter 7 . 1/1/2017 u |
JasmineDragon22 chapter 50 . 8/17/2016 What a fun fic. I loved it! |
Ellachanted chapter 15 . 8/14/2016 Okay, since you brought it up, can a virgin female vampire with a stone like hymen actually have sex with a human male without breaking his um member? Because I am assuming Bella would have been a virgin based on her backstory. Unless that last horse ride. LOL! My brain always goes to weird places. |