|Reviews for Guarding Edward|
| SkaterGirl246 chapter 13 . 2/28/2009
I loved this chapter. I wonder if crazy Lauren will kidnap Edward...well I hope not! Then again, it would be super interesting! Yay! Bella and Edward are starting to fall in love! I'm glad that in this story they are falling in love slowly, rather then love at first sight! As for the strange scent, hm...maybe she didn't have her wig on? I don't know! But I can't wait to find out! :)
| TaylorNicole44 chapter 8 . 2/28/2009
Oh how much i LOVE this story the BEST that i have read! it's so weird right at this point about the stocker, but it makes the whole story make sence...great job with the story cant wait to read the rest!
| rocky937 chapter 13 . 2/28/2009
dude this story is amazing! im so glad i found it
| kejce chapter 13 . 2/28/2009
Mama's scent mingled with Lauren's is missing. Am I right? That being said, I wonder if not knowing that Mama is involved will factor into things later.
Great chapter, Kathie. I love Lauren's jealousy and how she regards every girl/woman/etc. as inferior to her. She's just so narcissistic.
I'm looking forward to more Bella-Edward scenes and Alice 'seeing' more.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
| TaylorNicole44 chapter 4 . 2/28/2009
OMG i loovve this story byfar the best i've read! great job! :)
| robsmom chapter 13 . 2/28/2009
very good chapter
| blackdawn112 chapter 4 . 2/28/2009
I love this story it's so awesome.I love the twist how bella is a vampire and edward is human and I'm only on the second chapter!
| abbiesue chapter 13 . 2/28/2009
im giving myself a headache tryin to figure out what can be missing from the scent? uggh! story is great...cant wait for the next chapter!
| EJ Santry chapter 13 . 2/28/2009
Good chapter. The attachment Edward is feelng toward Bella is growing. We know Lauren has her own routine. I assume that it is momma's scent that is missing from the bench, but is present on the notes. I hope the picture is the realization for Bella that someone else is involved. Someone had to take the picture!
| Link's Ocarina Babe chapter 12 . 2/25/2009
Oh! Hurray for Vegetarian Vampire Stalkers! (Or VVS for short, lol.) I like to see this side of Bella, because she is interesting to read between the lines with. Also, the whole sniffing incident had me laughing.
| Noble Korhedron chapter 12 . 2/25/2009
Hi, good new Ch., but it was a bit slow... B- for that. Oh, and : isn't a vampire smile, if you remember, "Twilight" vampires DON'T HAVE FANGS! :)
| EJ Santry chapter 12 . 2/25/2009
I liked the mix of awkwardness and comfort in this chapter. Both Edward and Bella are new to these emotions and urges, and their little slips are great. I really love how you reversed roles in this story. It feels very natural.
Also, I love chamomile tea with honey as well.
| robsmom chapter 12 . 2/25/2009
Another great chapter, yeah I wonder what Edward would like as a vampire. hm
| kejce chapter 12 . 2/25/2009
I was really excited to see the update in my inbox this morning.
Brilliant. That's all I can say.
I really enjoyed her exploring his house and ending up in his bedroom but not knowing why. It was nice to see the softer side of Bella after seeing her in "work mode".
I am looking forward to the visions Alice might have after meeting Edward. And Lauren! I actually can't wait for more Lauren and her next move.
| EJ Santry chapter 11 . 2/24/2009
Hallelujah! I can log in again!
It was great to hear a bit about Bella's past. I thought this might have been a painting post-rebirth, but it is interesting that it was done in order for her father to sell her off to a husband like chattel. I'm so happy to be a modern woman.
I am happy that Jessica and babe are fine. It would have thrown Edward off his game if she wasn't. I like the relationship/history you have created for Edward/Jessica/Mike. It is very sweet and grounding.