Reviews for Guarding Edward
lynne0731 chapter 22 . 3/29/2009
Hi, I love your story please write more. Please Thank you, Lynne
kejce chapter 22 . 3/29/2009

I told you already that you didn't need to thank me. You finishing the chapter was thanks enough.

It turned out wonderfully! The revisions turned out beautifully. You definitely fixed your flow problem.

I am really looking forward to the next chapter. I can not wait to see how Edward reacts to her answers.

I really liked seeing Edward admit why he was a bad patient. That part was really sweet. I'm a horrible patient myself, so I can definitely relate. I'd be the one disobeying the doctors' orders and trying to do everything I could as soon as possible. I definitely appreciated Bella saying what she did to Edward.

This chapter turned out so lovely. I loved "the talk" Bella had with Carlisle. That was a really touching moment. Much better than Bella talking to Tanya or any of the other Denali family. Embarrassing moment and all.

I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
clh2o chapter 22 . 3/29/2009
please please please update soon
AMayes chapter 22 . 3/29/2009
I'm anxious to see how Edward receives the 'news' from Bella.

I liked the heart to heart between Carlisle and Bella, very much in character!

I also like that Jessica isn't the complete psycho/airhead she is in so many other fanfics.

Nicely done, as usual!
nztwilightfan chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
argh! i can't wait to read more! i'm loving this story so much. it makes my day each time i get an update email! :D
oceanluvr chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
Awesome chapter... AH! I can't wait till she tells him. :)

I am so jealous even thinking about where they are. I so miss Colorado.

I can't wait for the next chapter.
Eagleswings81 chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm enjoying this story very much. Keep up the good work.
EJ Santry chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
I love Edward as a bad patient! LOL! I can totally see that. I also laughed heartily picturing him trying to push away the fake nurse as she tried to undress him. hehehe...

It's time. It's time. I am so anxious! I love that he came down to find her standing in front of the picture. Perfect set up.

I've never been to Telluride, but I do love it out west. Your story leaves me wishing I could vacation there too. I don't need the mansion.
robsmom chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
Kathie Another great chapter. My husband was lookinjg over my shoulder wondering why I was smiling so much, I told him had to read this story because I liked it so much...after all he is my EDWARD! I loved how you had Bella standing in front of a portait of her from 1919...great way to lead Edward into her story...take care and have a great weekend Cathy
Link's Ocarina Babe chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
Awesome! I really enjoyed this chapter, as we got to see the nurturing and slightly mothering side of Bella. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, when Bella reveals all! *Cues dramatic music*
Noble Korhedron chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
Ah, poor Edward! I know exactly how he feels about bein' sick! I had a horrific cold two weeks ago, just after I returned from my GEOL 20040 fieldtrip and I was in bed for 4 days straight! I really hope he doesn't panic when Bella has to 'fess up! B for the new Ch. B.T.W.
MerpTheMerp chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
Gosh they are adorable together.
Fanpire109 chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
This si beyond awesome.

I love the original books and all but I wish u would've wrote them.

I guess since i'm a strogn girl I like the idea of takign care of a guy and I guess that's wat makes this story so unbelievalby awesome.

I really can't wait for more I really need some.

One of the best stories I've ever read on here

In my opinon better than the books
Tina Wannabe-Cullen chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
thx for another beautiful chapter. I can't wait for Bella to reveal her secret and for Edward's reaction to it.
like smoke in my lungs chapter 22 . 3/28/2009
Oh my god, that wasn't very fair, to just end it like that! I'm so curious to see what Bella says, and how Edward responds, it's not even funny. Please, update soon!

Also, another good chapter by the way. P
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