I am so glad that I did not read this as a WIP. LOL

The only cons I can see for Edward is that he will not be able to be a part of his godson's life...maybe. And would have to wait several decades to play in concert again.

YESSS! Fist Bump here!

Of all the Denali s, Kate has always been my favorite. I am not a huge Tanya hater so I am glad that she backed off.

Poor Edward! Tanya will be after him. I am wondering if they could have run to Telluride faster than driving.

I thought that Bella would turn Edward because he was dying. Maybe Carlisle changes him.

Thank God that anything can happen in fan fiction! Glad that Edward will gain full use of his hands!

I think Bella should change Edward!

So if Edward is changed to a vampire, his hands will heal, correct?

I was thinking the same thing...where was the security team? I thought one of them would have walked Edward off the stage.

Hopefully, Alice's vision and drawing will help them find Edward. I think Bella is going to have to change him or else he will die.

LOL. Team Edward here!

If he was shot in the left side, I hope the bullet missed his spleen or he will bleed out and die. Maybe he is almost dead when Bella finds him and she decides to change him.

So the plan is to drug him, take him to the cottage to marry Lauren and if he doesn't comply, chain him up until he does. Although it sounds like the mom is going to kill both Edward and Lauren...the love her eternally stuff is creepy and she has a gun. AND Edward becomes a vampire.

So the mom is going to dress like an orchestra member and probably give Edward a shot. But how are they going to get him away from Bella and the gang?

Evil Pixie! Lol

My thought is that the scent is a combination of Lauren’s and her mother. I hope Bella picks up on the fact that someone took the picture and so now there are 2 people involved.

It sounds like they plan on killing Edward from the last sentence? Or at least holding him hostage.

I am sure that Edward would look spectacular and even more handsome as a vampire.

I could not find the link for the picture, but I thought Bella’s story was interesting. I am glad we got to read how she became a vampire.

Bella has never felt the mating bond before so of course she would be confused. It sounds like a Jessica will be fine since Lauren and her mother plan to do whatever it is they are going to do to Edward on Saturday night.

Maybe Bella will smell Lauren from her scent on the letters?