|Reviews for The Proposal|
| mama's-broken-heart chapter 1 . 1/11
I didnt see the plot twist coming. Even though it ended up being an undercover mission, was the proposal supposed to be real?
| Crazy Ninja chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
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| Arkell26 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
that was great!
| TIVA FOREVER chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
I was like AWWWWW! YES! And then I was like WOAH! DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING! That was AWESOME!
| Castleholic chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
loved the twist! good story! i really liked it!
| optigirl101 chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
ha ha ha! great twist! luv it
| Lealfaithful chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
That. Was. Great! Haha, really! Very nice plot twist by the way; it really fit in there for some reason. Good job!
| Cable Addict chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
Hahaha! This was perfect! I love that the voices in his head were actually the MTAC feed. Very nice, my dear. This was fantastic! I LOVED it! Best thing I've read in a while!
| The Dream Guardian chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
I love the story, it so cute and very funny. You did a great job with the interaction and I love the end line. To Vance who paying dinner, hell why not buy the good stuff. Great job.
| Copper's Mama chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
cute story, love the ending.
| Viktorija chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Lol,didn't see that coming:))
| from a gnome chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
that was good says the little gnome inside my head... he tells me everything. He approves of your writing. Be grateful of the gnome's opinion. The gnome will rule.
| Crazy Chck chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
OMG lol that was perfect and your covering up skills were great and what episode did u see
| wildfirefanatic08 chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Oh wow! This was SO adorable! I loved the end.
"“To Gibbs. And everyone watching us in MTAC right now. And to…Vance paying for dinner.”
Classic! I love the Vance paying for dinner part! Great job! Cant wait to read more of your stories-
| Bergdorf chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I absolutely didn't see it coming :), I just thought it was weird they called each other "dear" XD
Great job :)