|Reviews for The Price That Must be Paid|
| iamlordvoldemort1981 chapter 5 . 2/3/2013
Please keep writing this story it is fantastic and really needs to be continued :)
| lizb1813 chapter 5 . 6/15/2012
When I saw drama & the title, I thought for certain that Tony was going to die... thank you for not killing him! :-)
| SarahKnight chapter 5 . 6/6/2012
This was a really well-written story. Like the combination of sick-fic and action. Good stuff. Wasn't keen on the derogatory term "rag-head" - I know it was aimed at a bad guy, but it didn't sit well having the hero use a racist insult.
| Artistry201 chapter 5 . 1/4/2010
LOVED the story! You're a fantastic writer and I enjoyed reading this. Definitely keep writing! You're fabulous!
| motherduckatschool chapter 5 . 10/11/2009
Write more stories.
| Lady Skywalker13 chapter 5 . 2/9/2009
Aww, that date was so cute! Poor Rhodey...he doesn't even know what he interuppted, hehe.
| tamasit1 chapter 5 . 2/9/2009
Glad Tony finally got his date and some 'action'. Rhodey is going to need to think about when he calls now that he knows Pepper and Tony are together, or he might just get to talk to Jarvis, lol. Nice ending.
| Magic-Amethyst80 chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
Very good so far, loads of suspense, and like the hurt/comfort bit you had going.
| Snow'sLuckyCat chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
for the love of all that is holy, you MUST CONTINUE this ASAP, Elizabeth! YOU MUST! You can't just leave me hanging, especially not like this! :c o
i mean, first having the flu/infection and now he gets blown up too? this can not be happening! :( especially not without a resolution! ;)
was rhodey in his war machine suit? or did he get to nyc by more conventional ways? and wat was with Jarvis advising tony not to go? i totally agree with the AI. but was there something wrong with the suit? or was jarvis just concerned about how sickly his boss had been just a few days earlier? or was it more of a you're-not-thinking-straight-cuz-you're-so-angry-so-stay-here-and-calm-down-first-before-you-go kind of a warning?
PS by the by, i totally agree with you on rhodey's stance now. so - no hard feelings ok? as it was NOT my attention to be nit-picky or preachy at all. playing devil's advocate after all is definitely way better and more intellectual than being just a yes-man. :) and well, i really truly hope i didn't offend or upset you with my last review, for that was definitely NOT my intent either.
| Lady Skywalker13 chapter 4 . 2/4/2009
Whoa! *That's* the cliff hanger? You are so evil...and awesome! I love this story so far. It's such a creative plot.
| tamasit1 chapter 4 . 2/4/2009
You are evil. Nice cliffhanger, I seriously had no idea you would leave it like that.
| Snow'sLuckyCat chapter 3 . 1/31/2009
Another great update, Elizabeth! :)
And - NOW - that I know what's going on - I absolutely luv the idea of a possible rogue agent in Tony/Rhodey/Pepper's midsts. And lord knows that in RL, that kind of thing is pretty common and REALISTIC to occur, especially in this day and age. So, i also really liked tony's wary, better-to-be-safe-than-sorry stance on this issue as being part your story!
(Rhodey's stance tho was MAYBE wee bit off, considering he SHOULD know that there ARE already documented and true government conspiracies out there...Watergate, anyone? So - what's one more to add to that list?)
But - that one small personal quibble aside - I'm definitely of course looking forward to seeing more similarly-superb chapters of this lovely-so-far fic, so please update this soon! :)
| Lady Skywalker13 chapter 3 . 1/30/2009
I so love Pepper in this story! I definately look froward to more.
| tamasit1 chapter 3 . 1/30/2009
Great job on the press conference and I really liked the conversation between Tony and Rhodey.
| Lady Skywalker13 chapter 2 . 1/29/2009
Poor Tony!I feel so bad for him. His alibi seems pretty solid so I don't see how things could get worse. I look forward to more, as always!
Also, I noticed at the bottom of the page, there are ads for Iron Man stuff (obviously) but also Vick's cold medicine, haha.