Very good. You capture the emotions very well, and the helplessness of those around the bereaved. I like your characterization of Crais. He was a great character, and he'll be missed.

Nice to see it all from Crais' point of view for a chance. Liked it!

Oh lord, you just love makin' me sad don't you! Umm coherent comments...Crais POV, now thats not been done alot! Nice to hear from other characters, ok, thats about as coherent as you're gonna get at 12:20am. Except the usual: loving it, write more, you are the best, kinda thing!

Eve :-)

Crais doesn't get a lot of attention, does he? I think thats a shame. He has a lot to offer really, and I think this fic fully demonstrates his unique point of view. Of all the characters, only he truly knows what is was to have once be a Peackeeper.

Bravissimo! You are very good indeed, Minh (not idle flattery).

That was just so wonderful. I saw Icarus Abides six million Frelling times and only managed to stop crying around four million...but that was wonderful. Perfect.

I really liked it. Short & sweet & true to character. :)

Ya know, I have got to stop reading these types of fics. They always make me so sad. What Aeryn must be going through. I don't think I could bare it. I came *this* close to crying. I held it back though, I'm tired of crying. Very well written. I was kind of doubtful on the point of view, but I'm glad I read it 'cause it was good, even if it was depressing. Excelent job. eshell

That was beautiful. I enjoyed the unique point of view.

seva

Though Aeyrn and John are my favorite couple, Crais is my favorite character. I love stories bout him and you did a wonderful job. I could hear him saying the words you wrote. I really liked the way you expressed his puzzelment at the EMOTIONS, then his final understanding. VEry very nice.

I like. A novel perspective on IA that I haven't seen done before. Well written :)

wow, i'm pretty impressed. i nothing else to say.

Excellent! I could imagine these thoughts running through Crais's head. Well done and thanks, Ali D :~)

I wasn't really depressed, i thought it was very well written.

Very, very nice. I love when people write from a

perspective they know and can apply it so well to

a fictional character. I totally believed this was Crais speaking, and I could feel Aeryn's pain through his words. Beautiful work.