Reviews for Wonders
Ethereal Sphere chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
Um this is just Lily potter not Liliy Luna potter who is harry's daughter.. But awesome little pice of work.
ThoughtBubble18 chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
Wow, my jaw dropped. So, so beautiful.
Bubbles of Colours chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
And her wish came true :(
jeanpaulreddy93 chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
Damn... That's pretty deep. Don't know what else to say except thanks for the short but somewhat vague feeling invoking story.
Angelic Fluffle chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
The characters say Lily Luna P. - did you mean to choose that one?
Narcissa-Weasly chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Really good story :)

However, you named Lily Luna Potter as the person the story was about (and Harry), but Lily Luna is Harry's daughter.
ClairWCook chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
beautiful you love are
Analie Janes chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
That is so sad! Amazing writing. :)

deleted111 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Sad, beautiful x
seductionandcandlelight chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
so few words for such a big story. why not, if you can do it. beautiful to have her in that in-between reality, and well set up for so few sentences :)
Lucretia-Caseyandra chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
This was awesome. Short, but filled with wonder (ha, ha, pun). :) But did you mean Lily Evans P.? Isn't Lily Luna P. Harry's daughter? Just asking. ~Caseyandra
hereviltwinsister chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Utterly Ostentatious chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
im getting the feeling that i'll say this about most of your stories that i read but they're all so simplistic and raw. but im confused with this oneā€¦could you explain it to me? like is she daed or is she realizing the danger for him? sorry but im curious
RavenEcho chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Good little drabble.

Only one comment- you seem to have accidentally put one of the characters as Lily Luna, instead of Lily Evans Potter.
Gerwish chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Breathtaking. Everything you write is beautiful. A note: you listed the wrong character, Lily Luna Potter is Harry's daughter, not his mother.
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