Reviews for Intangible
machievelli chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Posted 12 October 2013, at the Starwarsknights web site and the Lucasforums Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. I was posting directly to the actual story threads, but had problems last year so I was stymied in my attempts to post the reviews. But you on fanfiction deserve your reviews, even if I am running late. But I'm catching up as you read this!

KOTOR on Kashyyk: Carth has a bad trip, thanks to Canderous

Except for some editing problems (Through instead of Throw) it was a cute little piece. Having Canderous slip something into Carth's drink to 'cheer him up' ends badly, but doing that kind of thing is what a lot of people do without considering the consequences.
Mother of Ducklings chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Cute, and funny. My favorite part was Canderous' ill advised attempt to cheer Carth up (with drugs no less, good grief...)
bulletformybanana chapter 3 . 1/29/2009
aw, such a cute story! really good job, i especially liked how you had Carth playing the air guitar in the first chapter. lol :]