|Reviews for Salvation|
| abbyweyr chapter 5 . 3/13/2015
Good choices of scenes to give us from Edward's pov. It sounds very canon. Thank you for sharing.
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
SM really did write some horribly bad stuff. Still enjoyed reading the Saga. Am enjoying reading other writer's interpretations of what the characters were thinking.
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 3 . 10/20/2013
My first thought when reading the Saga was Edward and Jacob should have both thrown her to Victoria and/or the Volturi. And that's only because SM made her such a whiny pathetic character. I really think SM hated Bella from the beginning.
| Kaline chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
I like it very much
| Lady Dragona chapter 5 . 2/22/2010
I think looking at it though this lens makes it even more tragic. Well done.
| Lady Dragona chapter 4 . 2/22/2010
This is just as gut wrenching here as it is in the book. Well done.
| Lady Dragona chapter 3 . 2/22/2010
I think you are dead on. He and she were dealing with misunderstandings of epic proportions.
| Lady Dragona chapter 2 . 2/22/2010
I think this is wonderful. You seem to keep nailing it.
| Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
I think this could truely be what he was thinking. You did a great job capturing Edward in this.
| Kay30898 chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
*crying* Amazing. Just... amazing...
| LJ Summers chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
Oh yes! I think Edward's voice is very IC, here. Brava!
| miilla chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
You made me cry!
This is so realistic, it's like it really is Edward speaking. His thoughts is very believable. I always have trouble understanding what that boy is thinking, and you made it clearer to me. Beautifully written, really. Keep up the good work ;)
| left on the altar chapter 6 . 4/15/2009
Excellent work in this series of scenes. You have really managed to keep the tone of his voice in canon and directly on target. I love the particular conversations that you chose to illuminate, I think I could read Edward all day long.
I'm looking forward to reading longer stories that you've written, you have wonderful talent.
| MsRenesmeeCarlie chapter 6 . 3/6/2009
Can't you write the rest of the time they spend in Bella's room after they went to the Volturi? when he kisses her and all of that? Please?
By the way, I love your story :D
| missie33 chapter 6 . 3/5/2009
Thanks for those scenes! I really enjoyed them!