Reviews for Names
long-live-HP-PJ-HG chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
Incredible. The way you portrayed each team member, each silently begging to be chosen, is so powerful
Tekie Scythe chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Is there another after this?
Frakking Toasters chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
This is fantastic. I really wanted so much more from this episode. I felt like there was some room for a little extra dialogue between the characters during this scene in the actual show...alas. And just in general I find that they leave us hanging a bit with all the character stuff that we clearly all crave so much. So thank God for fanfic right? And especially for authors like you that have such a fantastic grasp of canon and seem to do an even better job of getting into the character's heads than the writers do sometimes lol! So wonderful job. I really loved it. Xo
Azerbajan chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Liked how everyone wanted him to choose them and fought with being hurt over the sane decision.
zookitty chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
That was BRILLIANT! you have everyone down packed. I'm thoroughly impressed. Bravo!

-Chris
Sandalaris chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
This was good. I loved the thoughts going through everyones heads as they watched.

One obersvation: Not sure if since it was from everyone but Reid's point of view, they just didn't realize, but the type of gun Tobias was holding to Reid's head, and how close it was to him, would have allowed Spencer to see what chamber the bullet was in, he would have known when the next shot was going to be the kill shot. I theorize that that's why he said "no" so many times, he was thinking, bideing him time, trying to figure out exactly who and what to say to give the best hint as to where he was. Just a theory :)
PinkHimeLacus chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Wow, this is so insightful. I could actually see the characters saying and doing this. You are amazing! Please do one like this but to Amplification please! Thanks for sharing.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
I like it! **
paper.creations chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
As you can probably tell from the onslaught of reviews and favorites I've sent your way, I'm working through your extensive collection of one-shots. And I must say, so far, this has to be my absolute favorite. Which is hard, because the young-Reid ones are amazing, and I love the Reid on Drugs series so much, but this one was just fantastic. I loved being able to get into the team's head, since I think, since the episode showed us, I know what's happening in Reid's head.

It was amazingly canon, as are all you're fics, it seems. I just adored this one-shot, and I can't wait to read the rest of them. Hope you don't mind me skipping the reviews on some of them, it's just there are so many, and I keep finding myself rushing off to the next one without taking time to say how much I loved the one I just read.

-Maggie
stargatemagic chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
That was great. The character portrayal was amazing, and I was getting nervous just reading it. I wish it was even longer... oh well. Thank you for posting!
Tuli-Susi chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Oh Gods, that made me want to re-watch the episode. My heart was beating just as hard now as it was in the vid. I always speculated as to what those guys were thinking and I think you did quite and accurate portrayal. I especially liked how you split it all up with lines from cannon in italics there. And it ended a a perfect place.
Rachel Evans chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Wow. I really liked this story. I like how you entered the minds of the characters, giving reasons for their name to be picked. I think this is one of my favorites of yours. _
dragondreamingsprout chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
I loved this, its just so... tense -, more fun to read than it is to watch the actual scene, especially when you hit their thoughts and emotions so dead-on -

and go the pseudo-human interaction -

have fun x
Crysania Fay chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Oh come on now! Please tell me that that is not all there is! I want MORE!
bananasrokk chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
ah...a Revelations fic. i LOVE these, probably because that was my fave CM episode EVER! and you totally did it justice! this is totally what the team were probably thinking during that scene!b AWESOME. kudos 2 u. :)
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