Loved the whole story and hope we can get story about all the 4 kids and their life that's it was very
Nice hearing story in what we cry and laugh and when i finised reading all chapter i was sad that it was the end and ihope it's not and another part comes love you and you are the best storymaker/author love you

I just adore this story
Is so sweet
Full of friendship and romance
I could ask for more

Too sappy.

Yay!

Bit late reading this but I loved it! Was fast paced compared to other stories but it meant we get to read more about the pup too. It made me laugh a lot which I loved, will be reading the sequel next!

That was a lovely story. It was nice to see Leah get her happily ever after in every way.

:)

This chapter was just too adorable! :) My left ovary just exploded :(

Hey, here's something you might not know... When the Dr or nurse want to see how dilated a woman in labour is, well, it's not actually something you can see.

They push two fingers into the womans vagina and separate them, using the distance between fingertips to judge how wide the cervix has gotten.

So, when Leah was embarrassed when Edward was just looking, she was probably mortified when he checked on her dilation, he he.

'I was extreemyl disappointment' with the spelling in this chapter, lol.

2. You make her marvel at how beautiful the vampires are every fucking second like stop. In the books which I'm sure you didn't read, Leah is just as beautiful. So please if you ever go through and read the comments edit that stupid shit out of your book. Please and thank you.

It's really painful to go through this book and read if for the first 9-10 chapters. make her so damn fascinated with the vampires she's suppose to hate. 2.

Wonderful and thrilling!

What a beautiful chapter! You really showed how hard it still was for Leah to endure the scrutiny of the Pack. I love her relationship with Jacob. I am a die hard Callwater shipper, and in stories that have Jacob/Leah together, secretly I am still rooting for Callwater. But I like how you portrayed Embry. Embry did succumb to peer pressure. We've all been there, so it's understandable, but you made me cheer for Jacob and Leah without disliking Embry. That's a big accomplishment (well in my opinion:)) Well done.

Great start! I love hearing about Leah's story. It seems like you are exploring a possible canon future if Twilight were to continue. Well done.

i wanna say thank you for writing the perfect ending to your beautiful story... this was so much fun to read