Reviews for Rising Sun
Guest chapter 7 . 11/25/2016
2. You make her marvel at how beautiful the vampires are every fucking second like stop. In the books which I'm sure you didn't read, Leah is just as beautiful. So please if you ever go through and read the comments edit that stupid shit out of your book. Please and thank you.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/25/2016
It's really painful to go through this book and read if for the first 9-10 chapters. make her so damn fascinated with the vampires she's suppose to hate. 2.
Guest chapter 25 . 11/21/2016
Wonderful and thrilling!
Silverfires chapter 2 . 8/25/2015
What a beautiful chapter! You really showed how hard it still was for Leah to endure the scrutiny of the Pack. I love her relationship with Jacob. I am a die hard Callwater shipper, and in stories that have Jacob/Leah together, secretly I am still rooting for Callwater. But I like how you portrayed Embry. Embry did succumb to peer pressure. We've all been there, so it's understandable, but you made me cheer for Jacob and Leah without disliking Embry. That's a big accomplishment (well in my opinion:)) Well done.
Silverfires chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
Great start! I love hearing about Leah's story. It seems like you are exploring a possible canon future if Twilight were to continue. Well done.
chemistrykim chapter 25 . 6/30/2015
i wanna say thank you for writing the perfect ending to your beautiful story... this was so much fun to read
chemistrykim chapter 22 . 6/30/2015
Okay you're giving me a heart attack with this chapter! please don't let bad things happen
Guest chapter 12 . 3/29/2015
Bella 'ran away' to the house next door leaving her daughter behind. She was messed up before she was a nothing much has changed with her!
Jane chapter 2 . 8/28/2014
Just found this story. I realise it's years old but I love Blackwater stories and this one is off to a great start.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/15/2014
There needs to be a Bella chapter too
Kimora chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
mccarta chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
This was a great chapter! I could almost 'feel' Leah's pain!
Guest chapter 11 . 9/25/2013
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Weave the Magic chapter 23 . 4/27/2013
At least they had a battle. Jaylah's power, I think, is a cop-out, though. (Having special powers is becoming a dime a dozen in the Cullen family. I'd understand if Marcus and Caius change their minds and agree with Aro; this coven is way too powerful.) Would have wanted Edward, or better yet, so that she will stop being the girl always being rescued, Bella to bring down Dimitri.
Weave the Magic chapter 16 . 4/27/2013
Ok, Mama and Papa definitely has to start looking for jobs. Sorry, cant keep my thoughts out of the real world. They cant be playing tag the rest of their lives... I'm a spoil-sport. ;(
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