|Reviews for Fresh Meat The Expanded Version|
| Ster1 chapter 3 . 2/2/2009
Nothing beats starting the week with a Dean-is-captured-by-crazy-cannibals fic! And I love how, in addition to the awesome hunt scenes, you really captured the complexity of the Winchester family so beautifully. Looking forward to reading more on Wed!
| Thru Terry's Eyes chapter 3 . 2/2/2009
Okay. One that was a BRILLIANT chapter, your description of the women was just horific and disgusting in the way they moved and handled Dean. They obviously have taste.
Ha! I made a pun.
Lovely and beautifully written. Disturbingly well written.
I can actually think of several titles from "Try the priest" but this chapter was SO good, I feel that it makes up for an title lackings.
I wrote a horror short story about a butcher, called The Best Meat In Town. He saw nothing wrong with what he did but he was horrified to find out his assistant had been arrested for rape because raping someone pumped to much adrenaline into the victim and ruined the taste of the meat. All while he was thinking this he was butchering a woman's arm.
| Vanessa Sgroi chapter 3 . 2/2/2009
Wow-those creatures are just...nasty. When the one licked Dean-that just freaks me out no matter where or what I read it in. And the promise of Dean whumpage in the next chapter sure has me looking forward to Wednesday. :-)
| Nana56 chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
Poor Dean! Sammy wouldn't say goodbye and see him off! Then Sammy got sick. Oh dear.
Is it Monday yet? *whine* I can hardly wait. lol
| I'mcalledZorro chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
Great story so far. I was going to leave a review last chapter, sorry I forgot! I can't believe how many people who don't know who the Donnor party is. Can't wait to read more!
| Thru Terry's Eyes chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
Sits and taps fingers impatiently til Monday.
(I love Sweeney Todd)
| PADavis chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
Have I said how glad I am that you are expanding this? Probably have. But I am. Loved the way Sam and John played off each other, and Dean's real need for Sam to say good luck, or see him off. Wonderful angsty goodness.
And not A/U? What is the world coming to? Actually, like you taking a straight shot at this.
Great song too.
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I'm glad to read this and really happy not to have to wait long for the next chapter. :D Kudoes to Phoebe for the 'encouragement'.
Great first chapter.
| wild-karde chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
oh, creepy, and original! i love the details of pastor jim's kitchen, ha, even though i may have skimmed some of the more graphic icky flesh eating monsters bits, they are icky precisely because of your word-wise talent ;) nicely done!
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Hilarious idea of Jim's to have Gordon Walker arrested for 48 hours, so he won't interupt their hunt. *snicker*
Growing up isn't easy, and growing up in the Winchester family is a real challenge, yet Dean should cut his little brother some slack. Sammy is just worried sick about Dean's playing bait on this particular hunt.
The portray of their struggling with each other as a result of their disagreement seemed highly likely at that age. They are teenagers, after all. And although Dean is already 18, he is still trying to find his place in the world as well.
I liked the hunters characterizations in this chapter.
| Thru Terry's Eyes chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
I'll beast the shit out of you if you don't update this one...
| 1983Sarah chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Me likey! I can't wait for the updates, take your time, of course, but I will enjoy them as the come in!
| PADavis chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
No whips, no chains, promise. This was a great setup chapter. I'm delighted to see a longer version of the drabbles come out. Really looking forward to it. It's going to be perfect. Well, it would be perfect if a coyote could kind of walk through the background or something... Stopping!
| Mouse95 chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
This is really great I'm glad you expanded the drabble. I can hardly wait until Saturday.