Reviews for It's not enough to be forgiven
Shawna chapter 2 . 3/6/2014
Great little story. Keep up the good work.
Shawna chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Great first chapter. Keep up the good work.
Torgetta chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Jasper had a good idea. Thank-you
Cumor chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Very enjoyable. I love Jasper trying to manipulate Carlisle's emotions to give him some sympathy. Too cute. Also enjoy the brotherly help with borrowing the CDs. Nice story.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
hehehehehehehehe! Very good!
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Very nice, sometimes you need to feel shame and ask for forgiveness, that was well done!
lak chapter 2 . 3/29/2011
i loved the story update soon
littlemsEMOtional chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Next time please make it a little more clear on who is speaking when. JUST CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM THE STORY IS STILL ENTERTAINING!
TwilightGuru09 chapter 2 . 6/20/2010
Another fine example of brothers helping each other out. Good thing Jasper decided to follow Edwards lead. Boy a tongue lashing from Esme is said to be a gut-wrenching thing. Her words make you feel spanked.
TwilightGuru09 chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
That's a nice brother to brother moment. They each had to share something with the other.

It was cute how Jasper wanted to help 'cheat' a little to help Edward out. But Alice nipped that in the bud quickly unless thay get into more trouble.
Ras1 chapter 2 . 6/28/2009
OMG I loved this! Particularly Jasper following Alice's orders to go get his spanking, and then at the end asking if he can go back to her and sending her emotions, only to earn himself a longer punishment. It's SO Jasper. I loved it. Also Jasper not really considering himself part of the family.

You should do another one sometime where Jasper compares punishments he got from Maria to those he gets from Carlisle.
wandamarie chapter 2 . 5/30/2009
it was a good one thank you
supergirl3684 chapter 2 . 5/3/2009
:D That was great! Loved the reason why they didn't argue back!
wandamarie chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
it was a good chapter thank you
Petuniac3 chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
L (so hard) OL
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