Reviews for Harry Mewter
Diametrik chapter 8 . 4/23
That whole patronus sequence was really confusing and left me feeling like there was something I missed. Why did his patronus turn into a pokeball which he had to throw at the dementors? Why was it (I think) a machamp? Why did he have to turn into a celebi to do it?

Moreover, this whole celebi thing also seems rather off. Why is he suddenly one of the gods of time? Sure, mew can turn into celebi, but that's just a temporary imitation. If a ditto decided to do the same thing, it wouldn't suddenly become a god of time, would it? What's next, Harry decides to turn into Arceus and realises he's the creator of the universe?

It feels like you took a huge sidestep away from the focus of the story being Harry as mew.
Diametrik chapter 7 . 4/23
Slytherin already played against Gryffindor earlier in the year. You probably got it mixed up because in canon Draco managed to get their match switched with Hufflepuff the first time because he didn't want to play in the storm, but in this fic Draco didn't get injured by Buckbeak so he couldn't do that. Now you've made it so Gryffindor played against Slytherin, then Ravenclaw, then Slytherin again, instead of Hufflepuff for the final game.
yochan123 chapter 7 . 4/12
should stick snape in azkaban honestly the traitor human garbage
yochan123 chapter 4 . 4/12
McG what are you ffing blind? not intending to fight them when they're like a second away from taking your soul away? CONGRATS
Emrys Akayuki chapter 1 . 3/13
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
tomorrow. Thank you. .
AnthonyR89 chapter 2 . 2/17
bagman was a beater, not a seeker.
Wondla Master chapter 24 . 2/14
Was... was Voldemort just turned into an Ekans?
Kryasil chapter 25 . 2/14
Holy hecc this story is amazing. I look forward to reading your other works 3
Guest chapter 12 . 1/11
So... the reason harry wants to stay woth the dursleys is because he wants to learn electrical engineering, but the only time he now spends at the dursleys is in a human form. Where, unless I'm misunderstanding something, he's in to much pain/discomfort to do anything but lie there like a rug. That seems a little counterintuitive
pleasereadme chapter 23 . 11/30/2021
One the sequel to this fanfiction could be Harry Potter the new in My Little pony friendship is magic universe or whatever he gets transported there two the reason why people don't want you to combine those two things those three things is because fanfiction needs a backbone of order and maybe some Angst and some other things then you get a silly stuff and you give it equal amounts and it's like a yin yang type thing a balance type thing now for sequel after you get rid of all the story plotline of Harry discovering and developing his powers and maybe going to several different other realities and doing good deeds then you go over to My Little pony universe and then you have Harry Potter you know just live there because he's the only magical mew every mew has psychic powers or relies on aura energy or is a computer program this mew should have magical powers and should have an evolution that's a panther like evolution maybe with a really detailed complicated rooms on the outside at Lowe's and rainbow colors black fur green eyes sharp teeth sharp claws covered in runes as well give the pamper a pair of wings that fold and can be folded into a flap of fur that acts like a pocket that has ruins in it so it's bigger on the inside and protect it in every conceivable way maybe make his multiple tales pretensile AKA use a tail like a tentacle hand and he has like 10 tails give him three sets of eyes too and a middle eye that's golden with a green Iris of jade that's constantly looking all over the place well his first two eyes that just look like heavily lit up with regular green Harry Potter eyes the second pair of eyes up or completely gold like floodlight gold like and the top pair of eyes are constantly shifting colors chaotically so basically gold order chaotic colors law regular eyes and instinct the golden green Jade eye this particular species of the evolution of mew should have inborn on multiple special effects three psychic related special effects three magic related special effects and three Aura related special effects you know how Pokemon you know they have flash fire and stuff this mew evolution has so many is because he's a precursor Pokemon and precursors before even the fossil Pokemon so it's like a prototype so a natural prototype not a man-made one the ruins in this panther evolution with wings multiple eyes prehensile ten tails pocket thing you can put his wings in that nearly a bottomless pit the claws and the teeth have a silvery glow to their ruins inscribed on them I think this supposed to represent purification and you should amplify the Phoenix tears and the basilisk blood like several dozen levels up that's now a naturally occurring part of Harry Potter's blood this will allow the animagus transformation mew evolution to be actually a God and not a demigod because the way mew it's portrayed in the video games and end in the game it's just another powerful Pokemon this way it will be separate from Pokemon but a logical next step for new be missing ingredient that it could never get was magic and Basilisk venom and true Phoenix tears so it could never evolve but Harry Potter could have all because those things were applied to him.
Silverwingzz chapter 7 . 11/3/2021
The ending was very confusing.
Silverwingzz chapter 4 . 11/3/2021
Its kinda of obvious that he has Entei as his transformation, which is kinda messed up when Hermione only has Eevee. They get legendary types but she gets a normal, thats not fair at all.
SilverMidas chapter 25 . 8/4/2021
This is an amazing story. I'm not really sure how I found it but I am glad I did. Thanks.
StupidGreasyGit chapter 5 . 7/21/2021
Its almost as stupid as it sounds **no offense**
HOW THE **BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP**ING HELL DOES HE GET A FRIGGING MAGICAL COLD?
hzlanderson chapter 2 . 7/2/2021
Wouldn't Harry be a black Mew with green eyes though?
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