|Reviews for Naturally Inevitable|
| KilluGon Addict chapter 1 . 6/29
| penyh1999 chapter 1 . 5/22
That last line...*face palm* why Gon whhhhhhyyyy!
| Queen58 chapter 1 . 5/15
That ending was perfect
| inuyashamunkey chapter 1 . 5/10
| Nunyodambusiness chapter 1 . 2/9
However, although I am not an expert, I would suggest you to use fewer transitions such as "So yeah" and "Anyways". Dont be sorry for becoming absent of the story through your details, and make your own creative decisions.
| Cjthegirlgamer chapter 1 . 10/17/2016
I love this I laughed so hard and my heart beat so fast.
| raisa864 chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
I really liked how you subtly touched upon gay nonacceptance and what loving someone means. It was very cute and well-paced. I think the ending was the best part with the irony. I just wanted to add that sometimes you forget to capitalize.
| Kid Panther Lover chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
If I were there, I'd be like, "FUCK YES! IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME!" And then everyone would look at me funny
Me: Sorry not sorry
| Anime dog 666 chapter 1 . 7/20/2016
This was funny
| Paprika11 chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
Can you add a sentence as to why Ging is surprised? And also, what he says afterwards
| ph chapter 1 . 6/22/2016
I think that this was sooooo cute! I loved it
| Dreamshipper229 chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
This was one of my first HxH fanfics and I absolutely loved it! I love the Gon x Killua pairing so much and this story made me love it even more! This fic was awesomely written and very entertaining, thank you so much for writing it! Good job! Xoxo
| Just me chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
There were a few spelling errors, but the story line was great! Please make another chapter.
| NoLifeOtaku chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
Why did it have to end? Goodness, it was such a good fanfic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2016