Reviews for Naturally Inevitable
epiccface chapter 1 . 7/17
You've got their personalities straight on! I can't seriously critique your work though because I'm not good at that. When I start to, I eventually start listing down every single tiny mistake and I feel bad. :P
A chapter 1 . 6/21
It was pretty good but there were a few spelling mistakes
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
More more I'm a blushing so hard oh my gosh
SlightlyYandereMelissa chapter 1 . 5/10
wiiTneSs chapter 1 . 3/15
Lol the ending was hilarious.
Arisa1999 chapter 1 . 3/12
I am still laughing at the ending. It was so good.
SwagMuffins chapter 1 . 1/4
Good story! Very cute. :3 (btw fanboys can read these types of fan fictions too. ;) )
Little Miss Kairi chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Oh god I laughed sooo hard at the ending. I'm not really into yaoi but I can read some, and this was fine. Nice writing and good job.
jhadnz chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
hahahaha...funny!i like it
and sorry for Gin...ITS wasn't a nice decision to left Gon with Mito
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
More please and I found this flawless.
pitou77 chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Ha ha! So sweet! Great job!
Naokoandre chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
The last part was really funny XD, poor Gin... he's in shock... XD Gon's too honest XD. Poor Killua, must have died of embarrasment
By the way, very cute fanfic :) I really enjoyed it.
Taki chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
Awww So cute sweet and innocent love 3
GreenDrkness chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
Ok this is one of the cutest stories I have read in a while -
Keep on the writes
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
I bet ging would react this way
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