Reviews for Naturally Inevitable
raisa864 chapter 1 . 8/12
I really liked how you subtly touched upon gay nonacceptance and what loving someone means. It was very cute and well-paced. I think the ending was the best part with the irony. I just wanted to add that sometimes you forget to capitalize.
Kid Panther Lover chapter 1 . 7/20
If I were there, I'd be like, "FUCK YES! IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME!" And then everyone would look at me funny
Mom: Language!
Me: Sorry not sorry
Anime dog 666 chapter 1 . 7/20
This was funny
Paprika11 chapter 1 . 6/25
Can you add a sentence as to why Ging is surprised? And also, what he says afterwards
ph chapter 1 . 6/22
I think that this was sooooo cute! I loved it
Dreamshipper229 chapter 1 . 5/30
This was one of my first HxH fanfics and I absolutely loved it! I love the Gon x Killua pairing so much and this story made me love it even more! This fic was awesomely written and very entertaining, thank you so much for writing it! Good job! Xoxo
Just me chapter 1 . 3/18
There were a few spelling errors, but the story line was great! Please make another chapter.
NoLifeOtaku chapter 1 . 3/8
Why did it have to end? Goodness, it was such a good fanfic.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
Awwww~
epiccface chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
You've got their personalities straight on! I can't seriously critique your work though because I'm not good at that. When I start to, I eventually start listing down every single tiny mistake and I feel bad. :P
A chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
It was pretty good but there were a few spelling mistakes
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
More more I'm a blushing so hard oh my gosh
Melissa the kawaii yandere chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
LMAO THAT ENDING XDDDD I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING
wiiTneSs chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Lol the ending was hilarious.
Arisa1999 chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
I am still laughing at the ending. It was so good.
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