|Reviews for Need|
| LittleNeko23 chapter 37 . 2/15
I dont hate that you changed the lore, its a bit cheap but easily overlooked. I'm reading the sequel next and as for your novel how far along are you? I'd love to beta for you. Pm me
| LittleNeko23 chapter 20 . 2/14
I have been stuck on this story for a week now but hun please spell check your writing. It's not brang it's brought, this misspell is bugging me.
Cant wait to finish.
| MyladyNancy chapter 33 . 12/14/2015
I haven't yet read further then this and I am confused because hre vampire body shouldn't her have children. i don't know if you explain that further along?
| MyladyNancy chapter 15 . 12/14/2015
I only read fan fiction that sounds like it was written by an adult with experience in writing. I really dislike giggly poorly written teenage day dreams. When i found out you were writing this as a 13 year old i was flabbergasted. yes there is some of it that is showing in lack of experiences and a little juvenile but your writing is wonderful. your story flow is adequate and absorbing. thank you so much for sharing your talent and skill. i am glad i found your work.
| Mischiefmanaged17 chapter 15 . 9/17/2015
Are they ever going to get back together
| Bird Mom Lover chapter 28 . 6/10/2015
nothing is wrong
| Bird Mom Lover chapter 26 . 6/10/2015
it does not suck beautiful use of cliff angers right there
| Bird Mom Lover chapter 22 . 6/10/2015
not what I was expecting at all this is wonderful!
| Bird Mom Lover chapter 20 . 6/10/2015
love it. the whole snide dog comment was great
| Bird Mom Lover chapter 37 . 6/10/2015
I love your stories! Aside from a few fixable grammatical mistakes such as how you say brung instead of brought they are amazing!
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/27/2014
So, Rosalie kidnapped her baby...and everything is hunky dory. Yep, this is a VERY young author. No way, no how, I can't even counue reading.
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/25/2014
Canada really is the best country
| DuBious chapter 37 . 12/10/2013
Hey I read the prequel and this one the whole way and I gotta say...wow. For someone to write about motherhood at your age is pretty epic :) anyways I love it and even though both bella and edward are slightly out of character., this is the only good lengthy fanfiction I have found where bella continuously ignores edward and does not forgive him. So thanks for writing this great story! Looking forward to the next one!
| springbreakers chapter 35 . 10/19/2013
Such a good story.
| springbreakers chapter 30 . 10/19/2013
EDWARD NEEDS TO INVEST IN CONDOMS
AND GOD DAMN HIS SPERM IS BOUNTIFUL!