|Reviews for My Rival and Friend|
| Journey Maker chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
I really enjoyed reading this story..
| MythCreatorWriter chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
Haha, Kaiba wouldn't be so stupid to commit suicide, let alone hurt his brother like that too. Too stubborn.
I like how you portrayed Kaiba here. Again I'm jealous that you have read the mangas, I've only read the last part of their duel and the beginning of the duel with Yami Marik. I also like when Kaiba laughs, that part was humerous. I laugh at the "rusty voice". Nice physical descrition of him too.
To me it kind of lacked flow maybe. And I do question the usage of all the !, even if it is Joey. Some spacing issues with words if you go back.
| hanabananana chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
aww I liked it ]
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