|Reviews for Before The Worst|
| Starviking chapter 30 . 4/18
ooops! You made a goof in this chapter! You revealed the Emerald's identity before DG and the reader is supposed to!
| Starviking chapter 40 . 9/6/2014
Very lovely final chapter. Nice and slowed pace. I was sad that everyone went their separate ways, but it makes sense the way you write it.
This story is great and really inspired me Tin Man fanfic wise.
You write Azkadellia so sweet . There are times when I wish I could ship Az and Glitch, they're such a cute couple, but the very first Tin Man story I came up with is a Glitch/OC and I love how she turned out so I'm committed. I also got someone for Azkadellia that I feel works very well, so she won't be lonely.
The only critic I would make, and this is just me not a slam on you, is that after DG and Cain are officially together, I would have done more writing on things from Cain's viewpoint. After a certain point, things got very DG-centric and I would have balanced it out more. Again, that's just my thing.
| Starviking chapter 34 . 9/6/2014
So heavy! And Cain's back! Hooray!
| Starviking chapter 24 . 9/6/2014
I like this chapter. Nice relaxing stuff before the drama kicks in.
| Starviking chapter 5 . 9/5/2014
I have to say, I am really inspired, writing wise, by DG and the others having a quiet time and doing mundane but relaxing things like cleaning and gardening. It's perfect for the heroes to go and do this before things get too dramatic!
| Starviking chapter 7 . 9/5/2014
I agree Tutor is an interesting guy, since he was a part of DG and Azkadellia's childhood. I try to include him where I can in my WIP Tin Man stories, but it's SO HARD as I write about the main four characters, try to have Azkadellia not be left out, have Jeb and both DG's birth and roboparents show up at times! So , poor Tutor is usually the one who gets the short stick.
| tin-a-holic chapter 40 . 9/3/2014
Excellent story! thank you so much for sharing it and hope that creativity follows you down the yellow brick road ;p
| tin-a-holic chapter 39 . 9/3/2014
So I have enjoyed your story immensely so, and I have felt all along that you have a great grasp on the characters-this is where I become a total nut i'm sorry to point it out but I find it so cute and funny- the one exception in your whole story is because DG grew up in Kansas, especially during her "formative years" [not educationally speaking cuz what now it's 2-5 right?-i digress] she would probably never had said whilst unless she was in a play ;p It's really the only critique I have and it's so cute. I can't speak for Lavender, Az or anyone else but every time DG said it I smiled.
Speaking of Az - i'm totally in love with her; and I feel so bad for baron Rex. They could have been so cute together. He seems soo sweet ;p
| tin-a-holic chapter 29 . 9/3/2014
"With all due respect Highness, I'd rather face your wrath than lord Cain's" perfect :P
| tin-a-holic chapter 26 . 9/3/2014
Loving the cain az connection, super sweet. Loving even more that Glitch punched Cain. 'you like yelling at people" so perfect ;p
| tin-a-holic chapter 25 . 9/3/2014
oh how dramatic and unexpected... well I was thinking something else completely *grins wickedly*
| tin-a-holic chapter 19 . 9/2/2014
Honestly I have no idea where you are going with the rest of this story. I am so intrigued because it feels like you can wrap everything up in about 5 chapters, and yet there are 20 more. I know there are few extra viles of liquid evil around, but I am sooooooooo curious where else you plan on taking us on this journey. Color me stumped ;p
ps totally random 'liquid evil' sounds like a great name for a punk band right, or is just me?
| tin-a-holic chapter 13 . 9/2/2014
Well in response to your authors notes, knowing full well this comment comes years lagging since your posting and a ridiculous amount of time passing I have to say whatever apprehensions you had in the past must have been the uncertainty of youth coming though only in your mind. I have to say this was one of only a small number of love scenes that were intensely emotional and believable. This was definitely not pwp. It was more like an artsy and tasteful love scene; it was beautiful and tender. Very nicely done.
on the off chance of you reading these comments what is your new profile handle?...
| tin-a-holic chapter 11 . 9/2/2014
Oh my sweet baby Ozma! how perfect a motorcycle for dg! That was amazing! I love reading this story!
| Starviking chapter 26 . 8/30/2014
I do love DG's dazey talk. "Go yell at him, Cain. You like yelling at people..." Very cute.