Reviews for The Song Of Roland Story Format
willshakespeare-immortalbard chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
Please keep writing this! I love the Song of Roland! Please...*sobs*...please continue...
Rose that Blooms in Secret chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Now I have not read The Song of Roland, so most my review will be from my own opinions, (do correct me if I'm wrong).

I will first congradulate you on capturing the spirit of the time. You show freely the cruelty of the pagan religion, in even sacrificing their own sons; I have seen other authors try to make one feel sorry or admire them, but this is not right.

As said above, I have not read the original poem, but your story has the feel about it that you are writing directly from the poem. This is good and I admire an author who is loyal to the original story, but don't forget to add some of your own original ideas to it! If not, you might as well be writing a summary of it. I look forward to more!

-Rose that Blooms in Secret