Reviews for The Deepest Passion
fijk chapter 1 . 11/12
bro no condom
Guest chapter 3 . 6/18
THEY ARE KIDS YOU SICKO
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9
Disgusting that people call this talent to describe. extremely vivid sexual scenes! CHILDREN are reading this stuff as there are no filters to keep them from it! It shouldn't even be posted!
"Authors" need to keep their lewd thoughts to themselves.
Bob chapter 4 . 4/25
Great story so far! Looking forward to the next installment! :)
Mulan chapter 1 . 4/22
Vampires
Bruce chapter 4 . 4/9
:D good story keep it up
Guest chapter 2 . 4/3
Great asf
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2016
I like this because usually Kataang lemons are just the two of them having sex but this one really shows their personalities...also I like how you continued on from an actual scene, not just make it up from out of the blue
katrina chapter 3 . 12/15/2016
I know its been 7 years since you wrote this but can you keep going with this story like when sokka find out ITS GOOD
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
Where is Ch.4 I've been waiting

You're an amazing writer

Even though their what...12 and 14 ish-ish I bet back then they were considered "adults" since marrying age for girls was like 16 just 2 & 4 years to young...that's a lot...yeeesh

Good job tho, stay flamin'
Maya Phantom chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
Not dissing your story but you do realize that Katara is like 14/15 and Aang is 12/13 right? They're way too young to be having sex.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
In brightest day in blackest night no evil shall escape my sight let any who worships evils might beware my
power Green Lantern's Light.
Wanderer chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
Awesome lemon!
The only thing is...
Aang is 12!
Wtf!
Matharose111612 chapter 4 . 10/19/2015
WOW! Hot and sexy! Bet she's pregnant!
Guest chapter 4 . 2/27/2015
You never poster a chapter four
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