HA! i wanna see Boromirs face when he saw Storm!

Great story, and the perfect ending for it to be picked up in a sequel! I loved reading your fic, it was really unique and was one of the best readings I have had for a while. Congratulations on finishing, I expect that you will have many positive reviews since it is done now. Good luck with the rest of your stories!

You brought Boromir over. I feel bad for him.

The wedding was fantastic, btw.

Looking forward to the continuation. Keep writing!

great chapter..please continue, I hope more middle earth characters will come. Wonder what Marie or kittie will think if they see a legolas or glorfindel

lol love her parents!

also the end of this chapter before the A/N made me laugh!

And so two become one. Well done.

Hi,

Love the story. Will be sad to see it ending soon. Question: What's happening with Scott? You seem to have forgotten him.

It probably shouldn't have, because it really wasn't ~that~ funny, but Logan thinking iambic pentameter is "ambivalent pentameter" made me laugh out loud for over a minute straight.

I think you're doing well on the wedding so far, even if the Pirates of the Caribbean wedding was simply awesome.

*blinkblink* I'm really not sure what to say. Logan, in a Middle Earth wedding? And what about his world, and Scott? You be leaving a few strings untied.

And I'm looking forward to Chance Encounter: V. I saw the youtube video and was impressed. Keep writing!

LOL, meet the parents!

WOW! WOW! Wow! Filler, you say? Not! _

I love this conversation between Arwen and Sidhien! It gets to the heart of things, and shows the beginning of a bond between the stately Arwen and the elvish maiden of Lorien. And we all know that "It might be years" could actually mean decades, since Telcontar reigned over the reunited kingdom for over a century, if memory serves. I think he lay down to die at the ripe old age of 190 or so.

I do, however, think it would flow better with a slight modification of the wording: I think you might choose a better tense for the "making a choice" verb:

“To think that I am not alone in my plight! My dear Sidhien, some might call you foolish, but I call you brave. It is not easy to choose, and I fear that both of us _made_ a choice that will cause us pain in the end.”

Why not "both of us _have_made_ a choice"?

And then there is a funny inconsistency in the POV for Logan's cogitation on the Houses of Healing:

He felt decidedly uncomfortable in this room, for fear that he’d break something by just moving. It was like _having_ a bull, no, a bear in a room full of crystal.

If you are telling this from Logan's POV, why not "_being_ a bull... in a room full of crystal."?

"Brandished"? Implies waving them around in the air, gesturing/displaying threateningly.

Why not "extended"? That would express his sense of alarm, and still account for the shredded sheets.

I like that you have Logan finally coming to terms with the culture of Middle Earth sufficiently at this point to be explaining 20th century Americanisms and scientific terms like "claustrophobia" to his friends. As you have developed him it has been a hard-won awareness. _

O.M.G... "he had taken down ten mûmakil all on his own" Think what a mountain of carrion that would be!

"Steppe gave way to tundra." If you are going south from the grasslands of Rohan, you will not find tundra: that is a geoform of the far north. Gondor is in the warm and sunny south. You would be safer to say something like "the undulating grasslands of the Eastfold gave way to the ...(pastures and fields?) of Anorien..."

hey! love this chapter, but am kinda depressed coz this is almost over... *sniff* :(

lol anyways, whats with the no logan/glorfy conflict? and i reckon u should so (in either this or the sequel...) so have some o logans students show up and be all 'aww! u didnt get a bachelor party!' lol update soon!

Nicely done! I'm a little sad to see this coming to an end...it helps to cheer me up in the middle of the week, whenever I get around to read it. Thanks for writing.

*looks at chapter, squees* (uh-oh I sound like a sue) hehhe. I loved this chapter! Finally their reunion, how are you going to work out the going to the blessed lands thing? Is there going to be a love scene? Oh I hope there is, I just love passionate ones. Pretty please?

Cherish15

I'm glad you got another chapter out and it's sad that this story is coming to a close; but the sequel might be interesting!