A great story. Thank you

Great story! Thank you for writing this. I really like how Harry blends with the Smallville crowd. Great job on the characterizations!

I found this story well after you have stopped updating it. I must say, I love the changes you have made. I wish you were still writing it.

Seems interesting needs updates though.

lool so trash

I do like the thought that Fudge gave so few shits about anything that he just let Marge float away forever

Your Harry tends to forget spells other than stunners exist in unexpected situations. Literally every time he's gotten his ass handed to him in this story it's because he was throwing stunners around instead of real spells. I mean, it proves that the Order is usually useless (in cannon) I guess

WHILST

Well that makes slightly more sense. Harry's not doing great at the not fucking up everything he tries though, gotta say.

So Harry walked around for 15 minutes, got a splitting headache because he was frustrated, then apparated home to practice (pout) oclumency?

Grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere I can deal with. Using whilst 5 times in 3 sentences is an abomination. Even using the word whilst just shows an unfamiliarity with spoken English or some weird desire to sound like an uppity librarian in his late 80s

hope you come back to this soon so harry is like shazam/black adam and i suspect lana is the magical threat? or black adam could be?

why isnt he going to tell chloe? she deserves to know and harry knows how it feels when other keep things about him from him yet he doing it to chloe? he forgot lois saw him teleport, thus now chloe clark and lois know he is powered or assume hence why they thought he was taken

so he rather keep his serect a bit long then help a young kid? whoa talk about selfish , that not very hero or good guy like , yes he did so at the end but he was forced to..i understand it somewhat but he should have just bit the bullet and told them sooner

Lol Cremation is a pagan ritual and was considered heathenic by the church during the dark ages. It's not muggle. It anything prescribing Burial is "muggle" or more importantly Christian. I am not suprised at all.