Reviews for Harry Potter and the Ascension of Ra
Hadeen chapter 34 . 10/9
A great story. Thank you
SunPho3n1x chapter 34 . 8/2
Great story! Thank you for writing this. I really like how Harry blends with the Smallville crowd. Great job on the characterizations!
Masteria chapter 34 . 7/11
I found this story well after you have stopped updating it. I must say, I love the changes you have made. I wish you were still writing it.
jimmy.oz chapter 1 . 5/30
Seems interesting needs updates though.
Guest chapter 34 . 2/13
lool so trash
Slowest Turtle chapter 31 . 12/11/2022
I do like the thought that Fudge gave so few shits about anything that he just let Marge float away forever
Slowest Turtle chapter 30 . 12/11/2022
Your Harry tends to forget spells other than stunners exist in unexpected situations. Literally every time he's gotten his ass handed to him in this story it's because he was throwing stunners around instead of real spells. I mean, it proves that the Order is usually useless (in cannon) I guess
Slowest Turtle chapter 19 . 12/11/2022
Slowest Turtle chapter 17 . 12/11/2022
Well that makes slightly more sense. Harry's not doing great at the not fucking up everything he tries though, gotta say.
Slowest Turtle chapter 16 . 12/11/2022
So Harry walked around for 15 minutes, got a splitting headache because he was frustrated, then apparated home to practice (pout) oclumency?
Slowest Turtle chapter 6 . 12/11/2022
Grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere I can deal with. Using whilst 5 times in 3 sentences is an abomination. Even using the word whilst just shows an unfamiliarity with spoken English or some weird desire to sound like an uppity librarian in his late 80s
nagiten chapter 34 . 11/25/2022
hope you come back to this soon so harry is like shazam/black adam and i suspect lana is the magical threat? or black adam could be?
nagiten chapter 31 . 11/25/2022
why isnt he going to tell chloe? she deserves to know and harry knows how it feels when other keep things about him from him yet he doing it to chloe? he forgot lois saw him teleport, thus now chloe clark and lois know he is powered or assume hence why they thought he was taken
nagiten chapter 29 . 11/25/2022
so he rather keep his serect a bit long then help a young kid? whoa talk about selfish , that not very hero or good guy like , yes he did so at the end but he was forced to..i understand it somewhat but he should have just bit the bullet and told them sooner
sorcerersupreme14 chapter 31 . 11/23/2022
Lol Cremation is a pagan ritual and was considered heathenic by the church during the dark ages. It's not muggle. It anything prescribing Burial is "muggle" or more importantly Christian. I am not suprised at all.
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