Reviews for Yokoshima The Fullmetal alchemist
Satsujinki Nanaya chapter 2 . 8/30/2011
what an intresting story you wrote I thin that thanks to your story I will start reading ghost sweeper Mikami fictions too, and you are a fellow Italian to boot what a luck day hope you upload more soon
sterdnert chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
yokoshima the fullmetal alchemist?

that's good as both manga/anime is my favourite..

i'll wait for your update!
eixirt chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Nice story I wish you can update more often especially in "novel format". I want to know more about the outcome of the story coz its getting "VERY" interesting especially know that Mikami's true feelings are now revealed. I really hope you can post the next chapter soon. I'll be waiting!
Scarabeye3000 chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Neo-politan singers are mostly Italians so its ok... but the Thing is, its really gruelling to read something in

'SCRIPT FORMAT'

PLease do a novel format fic or at least rewrite it in novel format. Its much more fun to read and less static and repetitive, it also gives more emotion to the characters that you are making.

That is the big differences with Anime and Fanfiction, with Anime you see the emotion but with the Fanfiction you need to 'make

' the reader feel the emotion.

OK? Please redo it again.
vancarter chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
wow!

its a nice surprise for me to find another person writing a fic about this series

i've just read the first chapter and its getting interesting so i ill be very pleased if you continue with it

oh by the way im writting a fic in the spanish section but i translated some names from the japanese manga wich i got complete and i wanna know if the correct way is RUSHIORA (which is the one im using) or LUCCIOLA cause i think u got the manga on italian complete cause i only got til number 17 and i couldnt see another way to write her name

well thats all for now but i could realize that i understood fine the japanese manga cause we have very similar concepts about monju and reihatou (hand of glory) and finally do you know the names of mikami's father and yokoshima's mother cause i totally forget it & i can find it in the manga again XD

see ya!