|Reviews for SINGLE LADIES|
| gerryade.merrygold chapter 7 . 1/21/2013
Update Plz xxx
| fantasylover4evr chapter 7 . 1/12/2011
well i love it, and i cant wait 4 the next post :D
| lover95 chapter 7 . 11/7/2010
OMG when are going to update im in pain waiting to see what happens. Love your story, keep on writing.
| Ka5tie-marie-cullen chapter 7 . 8/21/2010
I know you havent updated in a while but please continue the story !
| Arctick Child chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Sweetheart, there's a reason Caps Lock can be turned off. All through this first chapter, I saw blatant rape of capitals and bolded text. Believe it or not, a /good/ writer doesn't have to blind their readers to make them think something's good. In fact, they don't even have to slightly scar them. They can capture a reader's attention, hold it, and leave their audience eager for more, unlike this story which just makes me want to shoot myself in the face.
Also, song, poem, and newspaper article titles are set off in quotations, and not by CAPITALIZING EVERY LETTER LIKE THIS WHICH JUST MAKES YOU WANNA SCREAM, DON'T YOU AGREE? For example, SINGLE LADIES should be "Single Ladies." The artist also needs to be set off, as we don't strictly need that information. In fact, this whole shit!fic needs to be run through by a harsh, blunt, honest Beta. Preferably before you scar anyone for life.
Now, the announcements. Adding a little more description would make all our lives a helluva lot easier, moron. There's no need to announce the time and location. That would be like me walking into a room and saying "I HAVE WALKED INTO THE KITCHEN ON A SUNDAY MORNING." Pretty pointless narration, as a quick glance around would tell us the exact same shit, and be far more pleasant that the pile of crap you've collected here.
Punctuation is your friend, ignorant n00b. And it makes the readers a lot more comfortable, too.
More than that, you don't need all the lazy, emotionless narration. Seriously. It wastes space and time. So please, get yourself a Beta, and rewrite this so you can upload it in a legible fashion, please.
| Albell20 chapter 6 . 6/6/2010
Hey! that is an amazing story! MAybe you could bring in Bella's, rosalie's and Alice's past boyfriends or something. Ur story is awsoem keep up the good work!
| Mason and Alex chapter 6 . 5/24/2010
love it xDD
| twilightsaga1918 chapter 7 . 5/20/2010
Please keep on writing it
| MissTwilghtLover6 chapter 6 . 3/9/2010
i love this story and i feel so sorry for Alice and Rose. I so cant wait for Bella's story. What heart break did she have?
WriTE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
I just love your stories.
| hiatus.prettymuch chapter 7 . 1/20/2010
love the story please update soon
| GreenEyedMelanie chapter 7 . 12/13/2009
this is a great story! your a fantastic writer hun, dont let anyone tell you different
| BewarezINibble chapter 7 . 11/5/2009
hey your story is so great plz keep going i want to know wat happens later on!
| Bella-alice Cullen13 chapter 7 . 10/30/2009
OMG! THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I LOVE IT! KEEP ON WRITIN, ROCKIN, AND ROLLIN! UR AWESOME! BYE!
| Amberjoe chapter 7 . 10/21/2009
Please write more it is amazing im loving it! i want to know what happened to Bella!
| Blushing Bella18 chapter 7 . 9/9/2009
good story. update soon.