Reviews for Imperfect
xxxRecklessy-Divinexxx chapter 14 . 10/8/2013
What? you can't end there!but anyway i do love this story!
are you going to update soon?
deltagrl chapter 14 . 5/30/2011
GREAT STORY. I THINK WE ALL WONDER IF WE COULD RUN FROM DEATH. HOWEVER, I WONDER IF SHE WERE CHANGED IF THAT WOULD HELP. FATE CAN ALWAYS CHANGE. SO WOULDN'T ALICES VISION NOT BE SO ACCURATE. CURIOUS AS TO WHY THE FAMILY IS BEING THAT WAY. I UNDERSTAND ITS B/C THEY THINK SHE WILL DIE, BUT COULD IT BE THAT ALICES VISIONS ARE FALSE B/C SHE KNOWS SHE WILL LOOSE J.
GoddessxNyte chapter 14 . 2/16/2011
you should be cuz i kinda really wanna kill you! really let her die? can't they be happy together?
GoddessxNyte chapter 12 . 2/16/2011
ok they saw her dying...the only one that ever cared to do something was Jasper...the other didn't think to try to prevent anything? fucking ass wholes! I lost any respect i had for the cullens except for jasper...they r all pretty much dead to me.
angelsfly36 chapter 9 . 11/1/2010
Hey great story so far and if u want more Jackson watch beautiful people on YouTube. It's a show that got cancelled but all the episodes r there
Raksha Cuore chapter 12 . 7/26/2010
jaimie sounds like my best friend collin!
Raksha Cuore chapter 14 . 7/26/2010
Nice cliff hanger! BUT I NEED MORE! he cant just let her die, he should turn her into a vamp!
jaxcharmed chapter 14 . 9/3/2009
Okay - I wouldn't be paranoid unless you we going to actually leave it as the end. It's been a long time since you updated, so may I ask if you are going to post further on this story or was that the end?

Hope to have another chapter, and maybe an angry Jasper that wants to change and keep Bella...

Thanks for the story! :o)
JaspersDestiny chapter 14 . 6/24/2009
Uh, yeah, you should be paranoid by this chapter because I can't for the life of me figure out why they can't just change her and then she won't...die? Hello? C'mon!
wizziewoo123 chapter 14 . 6/11/2009
great chapter update soon please!
yuyu4848 chapter 14 . 6/8/2009
O.O -.- :'(

...

I almost cried. Its really sad. I can't wait until the next update! I'll be one of the first to read it! :)
ellibobelli chapter 14 . 6/6/2009
I have a horrible tendency to read the last line of a chapter or of a page in a book before I've actually finished reading the chapter or the page itself. And I was stupid and did it with this chapter. And, actually, the entire story thus far. But none of the other chapters made me gasp as dramatically as this one did. Good thing it's midnight and I'm alone in my room. I can blame it on my lack of sleep, right? Right.

Haha. So because I hate to be annoying and leave a thousand and one reviews for all of your chapter so far, I'm just gonna give you one super awesome mega review! Yay! Actually, I don't really remember what I was going to say about the other chapter, so I'll just stick with this one.

The only grammatical error I found (sorry, I'm a grammar Nazi) was that you sometimes don't add an "s" on words (like, possession), but that could just be a typo. And every now and then you use the wrong tense. I do that ALL the time, no worries. :P

Oh! I remember something I was going to say. The first time I read Jamie's full name (which I don't even remember now), I immediately thought, "That sounds awfully close to Jasper Whitlock". I'll admit, I freaked out. But I was being illogical, of course, and it soon all cleared up. :D

And another one that I now remember. "Jasper sighed. 'Technicalities.'" Yes, I know that I spelled that wrong. And yes, I know that's not the real line. But either way, it's now my all time favorite line from a fic. Congratulations. (Not like that's important achievement or anything. Just letting you know.)

This chapter left me breathless. Like, you know how people said that Breaking Dawn would leave you breathless? (It didn't for me, of course.) Well, I'm not one to easily lose her breath, and only few things have cut through my tough shield (or would it be lungs?). One being “The City of Glass” book, and two being this chapter right here. OhmyGod. If I wasn't sure that I would wake the neighbors, I think I would have screamed.

But I do have a confession to make. When I first started reading this, I thought it was going to be like every other clichéd Jasper/Bella fic I’ve read. But I saw hope in it (:P) and I continued to read. I’m happy I did. I have such great taste, right? :)

You’re probably thinking something like, “Why won’t this girl shut up already?” Well, don’t worry I am. But I have to be a whiny four-year-old first and say this:

Why can’t I write like you? You’re so good! Wah! I want to be able to write an amazing story, too!

Sadly, I don’t think I’ll ever be able to. Boo.

Kay, I’m done now. Can’t wait for an update. :)

With love (and much jealously :D),

Elli
CurlyDimples chapter 14 . 6/6/2009
Why has no-one considered turning her?

I'm surprised that the cullens are intent on punishing Bella for something she has no control over. I understand they were distancing themselves in order to protect her but still, they treated her like it was her fault. Like she was choosing to die.

It was a really good chapter, you have nothing to be paranoid about :)
armyprincess chapter 14 . 6/3/2009
she cant die! i bet jasper turns her! atleast thats what i hope he does!
Hailey A Potter chapter 14 . 6/2/2009
D:

You have to let me die?

I really loved this chapter, but now I am super curious.

What does she mean by die?

...t_t

I won't be able to stop thinking about this now lol

Can't wait for the next one!

:D
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