Reviews for The Aftereffect
Bubbles of Colours chapter 3 . 1/30
I loooved all this!
scarletsometimes chapter 3 . 10/22/2013
4 years later and this is still in my top 3 sky high fics. I love Layla in this.
TrintaC chapter 2 . 5/14/2013
not over the top, wicked hot though :)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/2/2013
im so proud of you yay!yoooooooooou did itttttttt
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 3 . 3/19/2012
This story makes me wanna wolf whistle all throughout. Very nice ;)
SlytherinBitchOnFire aka KT chapter 3 . 3/17/2012
Woah, that was hot in the first chappie, hotter in the second, and hottest in the last one. I, for one, would love a sequel, but I know that won't happen now. *pouts*


Queen of Night chapter 3 . 3/7/2012
Loved it!
LokixXxLuvsxXxEvee chapter 3 . 2/28/2012
This was great!
compa16 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Must read more
Nival Vixen chapter 3 . 10/28/2011
This was great!

Loved how Zach was more observant than usually given credit for.

Warren deciding that he actually wanted more and wanted to date Layla was a pleasant surprise, and I liked how it ended.

Excellent story! :)
Janie-Marie chapter 2 . 8/3/2011
Not only was that naughty, unseemly and scandelous, it was downright vixen. DO SOME MORE OF IT!
YuppersTisBeCaterina chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Ohh, I think this was a wonderful chapter _ you did very nicely. I very ,very much enjoyed it!
GrimmHime2045 chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
I am absolutely speechless. As I'm writing this I can't think of anything to say except that this was one of the best short stories I have ever read! I loved the way you characterized Warren and Layla, they were so mature and just... sensual! It gave me shivers and I will admit that doesn't happen often.

You have a natural talent at writing stories that take my breath away (and I'm sure the same goes for everyone else XD) and I hope you never EVER stop writing! Thank you so much for this passionate story! :D

p.s. If this was your first time writing any lime/lemon, I think I'm going to faint when you write with more experience under your belt! XD But you did an excellent job with it, especially with the imagery. It was wonderfully detailed.

p.s.s. my only comment, I can't really see Layla cursing as much as in your story; but hey, I would curse like a sailor too if I just woke up naked in my best friend's bed! XD
Jaded Baby Blues chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
Please please continue with this story! It is really good! :)
Jaded Baby Blues chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Loved how wrote this! I really like how Warren was described in this fic! He sounds so utterly gorgeous, all smokin' hot and smoldering...And Layla sounds like a woman who has such a sensual side to her! It was a very entertaining read and you should definitely write more M-rated stuff! What you wrote is gorgeous and leaves me wanting for more! Literally! Great job! I'm favorite-ing this!
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