Reviews for Afterthoughts
TorrentAB chapter 5 . 4/2/2021
Really great story! A very unique take on the Peggy Sue genre that I really enjoyed, especially with the fact that while this Naruto has some future memories, because they came as dreams they haven’t made him feel older than the kid he is. Really enjoyed Naruto talking about coming up with a possible Frog style, which really makes me wonder what that style would be like if he could actually develop one. Anyways, thanks for the chapters and hope you’re doing great!
FlameSparks7 chapter 5 . 9/30/2019
I remember reading the start of this but I must of forgot to follow it. Glad I found it again with more to it.

I love the new take on the time travel.
LightningFuryStrike13 chapter 3 . 7/2/2019
...I wonder if there's any stories where Naruto does pass but Sakura and Sasake fail.
Hinata91 chapter 1 . 6/19/2019
Why are u rewriting the whole Konohamaru scene...
Addles28 chapter 5 . 3/31/2018
Good but is it Dead?
Fanfiction4thewin-Blog chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
Can I just say I am really impressed with how you were able to change Naruto but still have him Naruto.
Its a hard thing to explain. In most Naruto fanfictions I find that people change Naruto in a way that makes him no longer Naruto. They make him to sly or witty, you kept his peronality the same, but have him changing, and not all at once but over time. I might use this story as an example on my blog, for changing a character but still making them, them.
WrittinInStone chapter 5 . 2/17/2016
This was great. I really, really enjoyed it and I'm sad you stopped updating it. I'm like you in that I don't really anything that isn't strictly NaruHina, and I absolutely despise harems so that also cuts back on what I read.

So, this was a wonderful treat to find! Here's to hoping that you update again one day.
jupimako chapter 5 . 6/29/2015
Wish there was more!
apeljohn chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
This is possibly the single best premise for a time-travel story (fanfic or published) that I have ever read. Genius.
hearts4794 chapter 5 . 12/9/2014
please update
hga chapter 5 . 11/7/2014
Ah, what a spot to hopefully just pause in this story. It's a very good one, hope you continue it someday.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/14/2014
I love time travel fics but most are so predictable and the same plot devices over and over I can usually tell how the story will go first couple chapters. I finally found a new one and it's unique but hasn't been updated for years I'm about to cry man really manly tears I'll look like lee you do not need that image update please
ruethemiss chapter 5 . 10/14/2014
I hope you continue writing this story because it is extremely promising and I would very much love to read more. You're awesome.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/16/2014
Haha I did not see that coming!
Tartarun chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
This is an unique idea, please update more
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