Reviews for Unexpected Hero
Jabomba chapter 3 . 6/7/2011
Good story so far but it could use more imagery and description. plz update soon.
mello-ello chapter 3 . 8/10/2009
are the cullen vampires or just amazingly beautiful lol
Midnight Equinox chapter 3 . 4/27/2009

i chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
I really like this story so far. Bella is awesome!
anne96 chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
great chapters
llallyjohnsonll chapter 3 . 4/15/2009
this should have just beed apart of the last chapter. and really, a date so soon. hell, she just met the boy. And according to you isn't she supposed to all anti social. Im sorry but if i was anti scial and had the nick name 'gloomy girl' i most defientely would not be going on a date.
llallyjohnsonll chapter 2 . 4/15/2009
short chapter...i feel its missing alot of detail. instead of jumping from one action to the next, try adding some internal dialog. you know, a look inside bella's head.
Acorn9881 chapter 3 . 4/15/2009

I LOVE this story!

Please update soon!

Love Yadoodledoo,

TheTimeLady125 chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
hoot13 chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Interesting. Update soon!
ShinyPixieDust chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Are you carring this on? Please say your carring this on!
ann marie chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
please continue with story
dreamstar1995 chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Write. Write. Write. You're killing me here. This sounds so good. So original. And there aren't that many original ideas here.

God Bless You,

Acorn9881 chapter 1 . 2/4/2009

PLEASE tell me this is NOT just a on shot!


I want, no need to know what happens!

Please update soon!

Love Ya,

anne96 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
very intense
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