Reviews for The Façade
CowgirlKelly chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
this is good so far
UnScrambled chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Wow... I don't even know what to say

That was outstanding

One of the hottest things I've ever read

And I love your plot as well
bluebaby3296 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
omg story is amaziing
margaritama chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
wow - what a great story and a great premise. I LOVE IT.

I want to know more - do they just see other people? Do they have sex with other people? Obviously Bella is having feelings for Edward.

Oh and dirty talking, dominant Edward was unbelievable. KEEP HIM KEEP HIM KEEP HIM!
xXWishesxX chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Sensing a lot of angsty coming..

But loving it so far!
stelladelnordxd chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Yeah, i totally want more. I don't want more Tanya. I want more passionate fucking. This was absolutely beautiful and...(pretend this is in italics) fucking hot. Can't wait for more, literally, and for Edward to realize he loves her. Wonderful job.

Jamie (once known as jayroolee, though i think you knew that already!)
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
that was so hhot ,too bad tanya called
mangocider chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
really enjoyed it cant wait for the next chapter
46Catarina chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Simply brilliant. I love dominating Edward, hes the sexiest! XD
fattoad chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Sounds great!

Is this going to be a short story or not so short?
reekaleeks chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
you are the champion of all lemons.
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