Reviews for The Façade
xCuckooBananas chapter 3 . 1/16/2011
Please update (:
Liverpoolfc4lyf chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
this story is amazing! it has a lot of potential! Are you planning on updating? Please do! its very well written, and the plot is interesting, i am dying to find out what happens next!

take care
thecupcakequeen chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
omg, this story is SO good. i love your style of writing! when are you updating? please, please update soon!
anneeeee chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
this is gonna be a good story..

just update more :)
Carebear22xox chapter 3 . 12/13/2010
You should write more. It's really good! :)
VampChick76 chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
Darn Edward for making her cry. Love the chapter, udpate soon!

~Xela
Leira Grey chapter 3 . 11/15/2010
I can't wait 4 the next chapter!
NoxHeiress chapter 3 . 11/13/2010
aww , how would edward say now about those girls ? yeah yeah , i just repeated his question . anyway , this story breaks my heart , and i want more of it ! really nice . can you recommend me some good stories without much heart breaking where edward and bella are friends since babies ? thanks . :) more power to yeaaaa . :D
cutieheart365 chapter 3 . 11/12/2010
I love it ! update soon ;)
inu16kags chapter 3 . 11/5/2010
this is great please update soon
Biena chapter 3 . 10/3/2010
Wow I really really like this story& was really sad to see it hadnt updated in over a year...do you plan on continuing? I would love to read more...

Thanks!
reesessweetie chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
i still don't understand how they can claim to be enemies yet live in teh same apartment and have everyone around them know about it. their excuse that they are both low on money is obviously a lie. how can they be low on money and live in the penthouse of the hotel? even if they are splittingthe costs, it will still be expensive. how can people not suspect that there's more going on between them?
reesessweetie chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
i wish bella had said something to him to let him know that she knew about his other women. he did break their agreement. and he had no reason tob e soo angry at her
reesessweetie chapter 3 . 9/27/2010
gosh, i do not like this edward. at all. how can he just be with other women and expect bella to still be with him? and to get so angry at her when she refused to do what he wanted? arhghgh
keyecullen chapter 3 . 9/12/2010
Must not have had this kick butt story on story alert because I missed where you posted chapter 3. Well, I have not remedied now.

What a chapter! Edward is an ass. Just sayin'. Damn, I just don't know why he can't admit to Bella that he loves her but I guess that goes back to my previous statement of Edward being an ass! *giggle* All those things he is thinking in his head about Bella, well, he should be telling her.

So, now Bella is drunk, heart broken and has a sprained ankle. Edward? Well he is hungover and gotten his piece of ass from Tanya. I can't even imagine what the conversation is going to be like once they are both sober. If they even have one at all.

Can't wait for the next update.

Keye
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