Reviews for Saving old bonds
hakon2feb chapter 50 . 8/12/2014
Hi.
Ok, so that was a very good ending to a great story :)
I admit that your fight scenes could have been better, but i believe it might come with time and experience in writing :)
And i think the same goes for any lemons you might make in the future.
I haven't written any stories, but i'm seriously considering it. With all the stories i read here i feel inspired to contribute :)
Thanks you for writing this wonderful story, and hopefully i will find the sequel just as good if not better :)
Untill then, stay safe :)

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 49 . 8/12/2014
Hi.
Ok, so the end is near(End of the story, not the world :p).
Things are wrapping up nicely and it looks like a bright future is in store for the leaf village :)

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hakon2feb chapter 48 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so Naruto is allright, the night ninja are being banished, and the kurokage is being imprissoned. Guess they got off easily considering they started an invasion :p

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hakon2feb chapter 46 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so that was a nice way to end the fight of the future :)
And i must agree with Itachi's reasons. Naruto didn't kill Nagato after all :)
Let's hope Naruto is returned to the right time then :p

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hakon2feb chapter 45 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so that wasn't very nice of you. Letting Naoto die like that, even at the hands of her own father :o
Oh well... If that didn't give Naruto a reason to fight then nothing will, so i guess they will dish it out good this time :p

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hakon2feb chapter 43 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so the attack is a greater success then first thought.
Now that everyone is inside the city, the battles can begin :) Hopefully Naruto and Itachi will be able to "convince" the kurokage to send Naruto back in time :)

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hakon2feb chapter 40 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so the vice captain was put in her place :)
I always thought she was way too lazy and too bossy in the bleach manga(Sure she changed bit in the last chapters, but still not good enough). Seeing her put in her place was really nice :)
Next is the invasion, or not :)

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hakon2feb chapter 39 . 8/12/2014
Hi.
Ok, so a sound plan, just the way Shikamaru would be able to make it :)
Next chapter will probably alot of dialogue with Naruto and his daugher, and possibly the start of the beginning of the end :p

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hakon2feb chapter 38 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so the die is cast and the course set :)
Naruto will attempt to travel back in time to change the future(Samurai Jack again :p )
Most likely, everyone from the future except Naoto will dissapear if Naruto is successful, but in doing so they might regain their freedom :)

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hakon2feb chapter 36 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so this chapter was really nice :)
Everyone is alive and well(except the iwa ninja who got killed), and Naruto has his family back _
I also liked that you gave that iwa Anbu a human side. Way too many stories have Iwa ninja as mindless drones who kill and rape for pleasure.
So all in all a great chapter :)

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hakon2feb chapter 35 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so Naruto is on his last leg and Sasuke is trapped underground...
Since Naruto has the fox summoning scroll, why can't he summon a less powerful fox to aid him? I mean, i'm sure there are other foxes he can summon, just like Gamabunta isn't the only toad summon.

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hakon2feb chapter 34 . 8/12/2014
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Yay, Naoto is about to be rescued by her father, and everyone are on their way as backup.
From the looks of things, then everything will be allright after this, so that should be good :)

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hakon2feb chapter 31 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so Naoto has unlocked the kyuubi powers that has been passed down to her... I wonder if 4 tails is the absolute limit, or if you can use more with training.
Oh well, the next series of events should be fun :p

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hakon2feb chapter 30 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so father and daughter have finally met one another. Could have gone better, but all things considered it could also have gone alot worse :p
Hope they can make up in the next chapter :)

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hakon2feb chapter 27 . 8/12/2014
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Ok, so Sasuke is the leader of the resistance(Sounds a bit like Terminator :p) and Sakura has a kid with pink hair. And it looks like they are all aware that Naruto might be alive.
It should be quite interesting in future chapters.

hakon2feb.
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