Reviews for Twenty Hours
sami1010220 chapter 2 . 2/5/2013
Great job, though this last chapter probably could have been organized a little better
Guest chapter 2 . 11/16/2012
You should write mor on this, it is good and very in character.
A.P. Read chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Cute! Hope e next chapter isn't gonna be messin with me
thetreasure11 chapter 2 . 7/8/2011
best last line of a story ever! 'screw it."
KG chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
Awesome story! More? Please!
Viviane Renard chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
A little time shuffling going on, that was exciting. I'm glad we got to see the back story as well, that fleshed things out nicely.
bigedwards chapter 2 . 4/7/2009
You capture everyone perfectly! This was great. Adorable couple, too. :)
Meg chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
I'm enjoying this story a lot, I'm such a sucker for hurt/comfort plots. Little things are off, though, like Kaylee using "swai" to describe their relationship, I've usually seen this word translated as sexy, which would be really weird in this case. Also, Higgin's Moon is the planet from Jaynestown, with the mud and the statue and the song. Wouldn't have bugged so much, but you repeated it so many times. Keep writing!
CuriousCate chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
Aw:D This was quite lovely. I can't wait until the next installment!
Alison M. DOBELL chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Loved Jayne catching the Clue Bus - with a little help from Kaylee. Glad Mal woke up and am looking forward to more of this story. Yep, they sure are cute together. Ali D :~)

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